knives

By KittyStryker




i am your pornographic love song
all soft curves and wet lips
eyes that dare.

my pillow
and my hands
smell like sex.

i ache for your touch
those fingers that leave me gasping
your caress of steel
against my neck.

i am very, very aware
of everything you do.

i throb and moan
and try to get at a release
that only really comes
when you say so.

i haven't seen you
in what seems like
an eternity
of waiting.

when at last we meet
you will push me, naked
to my limits-
i will cry
and beg you
for more.

it's never enough.

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© 2005 Bast
Published on Sunday, November 13, 2005.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"
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  • Dilated View On Thursday, January 14, 2010, Dilated View (583)By person wrote:

    The longings that eat away at us as we crave them more. This was a sexy piece, these are the moments worth waiting around for.

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, January 26, 2006, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    I agree with Exodus. Sensuality in all it's quivering glory, belongs to you. left me all warm inside. Second stanza... owns me, entirely.

  • WinterGrave On Saturday, December 10, 2005, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    nice, sexy and kinda dirty, loved the first line, that was a clincher.~~~Grave

  • A former member wrote: "i am your pornographic love song" Great first line, like the knife waiting to be pulled, pushed, poisoned. Perfect ending, & all the right meat in between. Pure erotica, as promised. Well done.

  • precarious pixie On Saturday, November 26, 2005, precarious pixie (11)By person wrote:

    perfectly describing estacy...wonderful job.

  • Exodus On Monday, November 14, 2005, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    you could describe this passion, this lingering, gasping desire in a 1,000 ways if you wanted.....you are that talented. I always enjoy your work. this is beautiful, made me tingle. Lovely.

  • veingo On Sunday, November 13, 2005, veingo (533)By person wrote:

    I can see myself comeing back to this one many, many times. Fantastic.^V^


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