knives
By KittyStryker
i am your pornographic love song
all soft curves and wet lips
eyes that dare.
my pillow
and my hands
smell like sex.
i ache for your touch
those fingers that leave me gasping
your caress of steel
against my neck.
i am very, very aware
of everything you do.
i throb and moan
and try to get at a release
that only really comes
when you say so.
i haven't seen you
in what seems like
an eternity
of waiting.
when at last we meet
you will push me, naked
to my limits-
i will cry
and beg you
for more.
it's never enough.
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© 2005 Bast
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On Thursday, January 14, 2010, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
The longings that eat away at us as we crave them more. This was a sexy piece, these are the moments worth waiting around for.
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On Thursday, January 26, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
I agree with Exodus. Sensuality in all it's quivering glory, belongs to you. left me all warm inside. Second stanza... owns me, entirely.
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On Saturday, December 10, 2005, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
nice, sexy and kinda dirty, loved the first line, that was a clincher.~~~Grave
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A former member wrote:
"i am your pornographic love song" Great first line, like the knife waiting to be pulled, pushed, poisoned. Perfect ending, & all the right meat in between. Pure erotica, as promised. Well done.
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On Saturday, November 26, 2005, precarious pixie
(11) wrote:
perfectly describing estacy...wonderful job.
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On Monday, November 14, 2005, Exodus
(172) wrote:
you could describe this passion, this lingering, gasping desire in a 1,000 ways if you wanted.....you are that talented. I always enjoy your work. this is beautiful, made me tingle. Lovely.
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On Sunday, November 13, 2005, veingo
(526) wrote:
I can see myself comeing back to this one many, many times. Fantastic.^V^