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nobody knows
By cre
torture perfectly planned
up on your toes as long as you can
pain cuts deep
when muscles sleep
tippy tippy toes
nobody knows, nobody knows
punishment thought out well
we know how to fashion hell
tongue in two
if tell, you do
terror terror fear
nobody hears, nobody hears
games no fun to play
we've a special one for you today
eyes so wide
run and hide
haha chained you be
nobody sees, nobody sees
torture games and punishment
to us from god you were sent
love you not
fuck you lots
it's the way the story goes
nobody knows, nobody knows
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Thursday, March 13, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, August 12, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175)
wrote:
the despondancy is truly felt here...........well done super cre..........urban
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A former member wrote:
I like your work very much. It is very reflective.
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A former member wrote:
:/ very nice...unfortunate that we have to keep our secrets so well hidden andsneak around just to hurt ourselves....
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On Saturday, January 3, 2004, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Eeek...this is so frenzied. Not confused but quick and jerky like some one who's in shock. You tell just enough to let my imagination do the rest on its own. This scares me, wonderfully written, but it scares me. ~JMDW~
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On Saturday, December 6, 2003, unusual_blood
(74) wrote:
I cried as i read this. fucking FUCKING amzingly good, the message screams out, amazing job
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On Sunday, November 2, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
this was awesome, kinda reminds me of a horror movie twisted with insanity, great write! ~Emptyness~
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On Monday, October 20, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
mwahahaha tis scary i love it, i like the love you not fuck you lots lines.. -chelsy
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On Tuesday, April 8, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
i think i'll just add one to this arsenal of comments ... why?, why not
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A former member wrote:
i love poems that remind me of pure insanity. :)
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A former member wrote:
that was a cool ending... love you not, fuck you lots. i gotta write that one down lol.
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A former member wrote:
I love this...it unfortuanatly reminds me two of my friends...(bad relationship) but GREAT work...
XDglass~~K
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On Wednesday, March 19, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
dirty, maddening, a ballerina gets raped after recital.
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On Friday, March 14, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
BANG!! Me like. Good job miss apathy.
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On Thursday, March 13, 2003, diavolessa
(208) wrote:
your works just get better and better, this one is soo good! keep on writing! :)
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On Thursday, March 13, 2003, Ravenblade
(313) wrote:
Awesome new work, and like I always notice with your work, it has an awesome rhythm...I still wish I had that kind of talent, teach me oh wise one
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