Darkest Places

By cre

There is a depth of darkest places
Untold fears and nameless faces
Whispered screams and dried up tears
Silent cries that no one hears

There is a land where full of pain
The smallest learn to make hurt fade
And in their state of almost dead
They learn to hide inside their head

There is a land of living death
Can't measure life by seeing breath
Hearts may beat and blood may flow
But all inside are empty souls

There is a sea of cold dark waters
Filled with hell's own sons and daughters
Cast there by another's hand
Drowning with no sight of land

There is a chamber cold and dark
Where evil leaves its ugly mark
Where hearts are poisoned till they die
And children learn to never cry

In this depth of darkest places
Gloom and dead of night encases
Foundations of an earthly hell
And evil that no one may tell

Souls cry out and seek release
Letting go they beg for peace
Hell is mirrored in their faces
These children of the darkest places

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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Tuesday, February 18, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • maddin foxxxy On Wednesday, March 12, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    agree with all above...ur talent is written all over...

  • Ravenblade On Friday, March 7, 2003, Ravenblade (313)By person wrote:

    YOu have a very unique writing style that I wish I could have, especially how so many of your poems keep a constant rhytym. I'm also loving the feel you add, and the portrayal of dark you refer to. Awesome poetry, keep it up.

  • A former member wrote: Dear God....I wish I had half the talent you have! Great stuff.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Tuesday, March 4, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    This poem hits close for me too - very well composed piece. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: what they said. :P i like it in the words of fish,"you are the shit" lol Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Outstanding work and very deep. Even though I do not know you personally the poem hits home. Scholar

  • Jonas On Friday, February 28, 2003, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    dark and macabre mood. very well written with some lovely insight and great flow. cre, you are the shit. :-)

  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, February 19, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    Very distinct feelings.. well written.

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, February 18, 2003, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    immaculate in discription,it seems that we both frequent the same dark places. very very. u.h

  • A former member wrote: OOOOOOO!!! i like this cre!! you're very talented :) good job poet!


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