Darkest Places
By cre
There is a depth of darkest places
Untold fears and nameless faces
Whispered screams and dried up tears
Silent cries that no one hears
There is a land where full of pain
The smallest learn to make hurt fade
And in their state of almost dead
They learn to hide inside their head
There is a land of living death
Can't measure life by seeing breath
Hearts may beat and blood may flow
But all inside are empty souls
There is a sea of cold dark waters
Filled with hell's own sons and daughters
Cast there by another's hand
Drowning with no sight of land
There is a chamber cold and dark
Where evil leaves its ugly mark
Where hearts are poisoned till they die
And children learn to never cry
In this depth of darkest places
Gloom and dead of night encases
Foundations of an earthly hell
And evil that no one may tell
Souls cry out and seek release
Letting go they beg for peace
Hell is mirrored in their faces
These children of the darkest places
Awards
Comments on "Darkest Places"
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On Wednesday, March 12, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
agree with all above...ur talent is written all over...
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On Friday, March 7, 2003, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
YOu have a very unique writing style that I wish I could have, especially how so many of your poems keep a constant rhytym. I'm also loving the feel you add, and the portrayal of dark you refer to. Awesome poetry, keep it up.
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A former member wrote:
Dear God....I wish I had half the talent you have! Great stuff.
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On Tuesday, March 4, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
This poem hits close for me too - very well composed piece. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
what they said. :P i like it
in the words of fish,"you are the shit" lol
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A former member wrote:
Outstanding work and very deep. Even though I do not know you personally the poem hits home.
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On Friday, February 28, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
dark and macabre mood. very well written with some lovely insight and great flow. cre, you are the shit. :-)
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On Wednesday, February 19, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
Very distinct feelings.. well written.
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On Tuesday, February 18, 2003, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
immaculate in discription,it seems that we both frequent the same dark places. very very. u.h
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A former member wrote:
OOOOOOO!!! i like this cre!! you're very talented :) good job poet!