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blue moon nights
By cre
blue moon nights
so pretty out
picture perfect backdrop
without a doubt
cold night-fingers
breeze in your ear
chilling landscape
inspires fear
glass-still waters
crystallized death
mirrored masterpiece
frozen breath
one blinking star
caught in your eye
frosty tears
waiting to die
unyielding wood
burns bright white
pinch - still alive
survived this night
ashes and smoke
hot dirty breath
small price to pay
for outlasting Death
cold little heart
fists clenched tight
won't be long
till the next blue moon night.
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Sunday, February 16, 2003.
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A former member wrote:
I loved it.
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On Sunday, August 7, 2011, Antaya
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wrote:
This is reallly good!!!!
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On Wednesday, October 21, 2009, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
i get... really excited when one of your works comes up on random. you're great, cre... and one of my favorites. kudos. -kp
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On Saturday, March 18, 2006, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
your economy of words .....captures what is needed............well done........well said............urban
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On Thursday, October 27, 2005, LiP Stiches
(42) wrote:
wow..............i really like your decrition of the night.............YOU ROCK!
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A former member wrote:
You remind me of Robert Frost the way you describe your settings
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On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
this is a very unique perspective, great words great flow, good job ~Emptyness~
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A former member wrote:
ahh memories...i liked it-X
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A former member wrote:
I have so many of these nights~Rachel~
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A former member wrote:
so beautiful. love the imagery. awesome ~serpentine~
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On Monday, February 9, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
oooh...gave me chills. FF
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A former member wrote:
Pretty cool cre, I like the short staccato lines, it gave the poem a neat lyrical quality; it sounds really good read aloud. Good images in there, too; that's something that I haven't seen a whole lot of yet on DP, though I havent been here long.
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A former member wrote:
I only have one thing I don't like about that one, and it's incredibly picky. I have heard the glass-still waters line too many times, maybe consider a more unique description. Told you it was picky :)
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A former member wrote:
Does this have anything to do with Once in a blue moon? No? Damnit...didn't think so. There goes all my dreams. Lovely write.
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A former member wrote:
you're very talented. like everyone else...i loved it
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On Monday, May 26, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Damn, I do believe that you just get better and better as time goes on. ~ mw
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On Monday, May 26, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
How alone and little. Beautiful...~DW~
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On Sunday, April 13, 2003, Stranger
(263) wrote:
Allot has been said about this poem already. Just had to add my 2 cents; I love it.
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A former member wrote:
Not to reiterate what has been said, but this is fantastic...short and precise. Thanks for the welcome!
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On Sunday, April 13, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
The eloquence of this piece touched me in a way i cannot fully describe - its subtlety of meaning is extremely touching.
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A former member wrote:
you've been good for quite some time i suspect. hehe. you are so good. :)
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful
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A former member wrote:
seemed like you were writing about being immortal for awhile there, but then i lost what the poem was about exactly. none-the-less, i still like it.
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A former member wrote:
fuck'n talented you are.consider me
a fan..
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A former member wrote:
very well done, stunning visual, strong metaphors...cool
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A former member wrote:
wow you are an amazing writer great work
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On Wednesday, March 12, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
GREAT READ!...can't say more than that
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On Monday, March 10, 2003, diavolessa
(207) wrote:
this is not one of those "novice" poems. This is well thought and writen! great, wonderful! :X
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On Thursday, March 6, 2003, shadowsinthelight
(146) wrote:
wonderful, S.
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A former member wrote:
Oh the wonderful taste in darkness's powers....I like it...great job...it flows wonderfully.
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On Friday, February 28, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
picturesque
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On Tuesday, February 18, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
good stuff rhythmic and cold and dark like. wunderliscious. Jonas
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On Sunday, February 16, 2003, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
i agree with the first two comment holders ..... this is a wonderful write .. nicely done
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A former member wrote:
wonderful, this poem moved me jane =o) Lol
-PoP RoXx n KoKe-
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A former member wrote:
Wow...it really took me on a journey...I love journeys!
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