triple X and triple A

By KittyStryker


she's a race car girl
built
for speed
and dangerous curves

she's the unknown road
and the thrill
of the chase

driven
to win

powerfully made
she embraces turns
and lovers
with the same intensity

slippery when wet
her barometer
will exceed yours
her eyes
are green flags
she wants
to
go

you can slip
into her bucket seat
if you think
you're up
for the ride
but you better hang on
cause she won't slow down



she's lean
and smart



she'll break your heart

and be on
to the next track
to do it all again


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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Monday, June 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Johny_D_Lewis On Friday, October 22, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    This reminds me of Cake 'The Distance' Wild ride I like the way you compared it..written perfectly.

  • stuart_pid On Saturday, September 11, 2004, stuart_pid (135)By person wrote:

    "you can slip into her bucket seat" this poem is awsome, just remember to wear a seatbelt.

  • murder_in_clubland On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384)By person wrote:

    I really like this its very cute.~ss

  • Jonas On Sunday, June 13, 2004, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    had kind of a cake feel to it. slippery flow like rubber trying to grip the road...

  • Anth On Saturday, June 12, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    woah, superb work,intense and full of energy and attitude, positive and cool (did i just describe you?)

  • aXe FactoR On Saturday, June 12, 2004, aXe FactoR (333)By person wrote:

    wow, a slick & wicked write. like it. -MeL-

  • A former member wrote: where can i found a girl like that..nice write

  • A former member wrote: i'm new to DP, but i've read a lot on here and i must say yours stand out. in a good way, that is. i liked reading this piece. good creativity. you along with many others are excellent writers. keep it up. ~Ashley

  • sixsixnine On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    fuck yeah! sounds promissing*) *669*

  • A former member wrote: Excellent...everyone loves a girl who can speed things up.

  • hate_doll On Monday, June 7, 2004, hate_doll (263)By person wrote:

    hehe, I like the sound of this girl...sounds like quite the ride! love it


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