triple X and triple A
By KittyStryker
she's a race car girl
built
for speed
and dangerous curves
she's the unknown road
and the thrill
of the chase
driven
to win
powerfully made
she embraces turns
and lovers
with the same intensity
slippery when wet
her barometer
will exceed yours
her eyes
are green flags
she wants
to
go
you can slip
into her bucket seat
if you think
you're up
for the ride
but you better hang on
cause she won't slow down
she's lean
and smart
she'll break your heart
and be on
to the next track
to do it all again
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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Monday, June 7, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "triple X and triple A"
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On Friday, October 22, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
This reminds me of Cake 'The Distance' Wild ride I like the way you compared it..written perfectly.
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, stuart_pid
(135) wrote:
"you can slip into her bucket seat" this poem is awsome, just remember to wear a seatbelt.
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On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
I really like this its very cute.~ss
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On Sunday, June 13, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
had kind of a cake feel to it. slippery flow like rubber trying to grip the road...
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On Saturday, June 12, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
woah, superb work,intense and full of energy and attitude, positive and cool (did i just describe you?)
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On Saturday, June 12, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
wow, a slick & wicked write. like it. -MeL-
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A former member wrote:
where can i found a girl like that..nice write
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A former member wrote:
i'm new to DP, but i've read a lot on here and i must say yours stand out. in a good way, that is. i liked reading this piece. good creativity. you along with many others are excellent writers. keep it up. ~Ashley
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On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
fuck yeah! sounds promissing*) *669*
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A former member wrote:
Excellent...everyone loves a girl who can speed things up.
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On Monday, June 7, 2004, hate_doll
(263) wrote:
hehe, I like the sound of this girl...sounds like quite the ride! love it