A Year's Worth (DarkPoetry)
By cre
A year's worth of washing waves,
And dreams like sand in the depths of a sea,
A salty reminiscence,
And I wonder at all that's become of me.
One less year in my future,
So many more stars in my sky,
Some who find passion in living,
Some who just barely survive.
Considering these lives I have read,
Portraying such losses and gains,
Drawn for all hearts to ponder,
Such beauty in these friends I have made.
This is my sense of safe waters,
This place where at last I am home.
So easily we grew in belonging,
So swiftly you've bound to my soul.
A year, though I feel I was born here
And I'm somehow a bit more complete
Because of the world I have found in
My year as a member of Dark Poetry.
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Here's to so many more. I wouldn't quite be me without this place. All
kinds of love.
Comments on "A Year's Worth (DarkPoetry)"
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A former member wrote:
you are destined to be published
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
much love, janie pie.
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On Thursday, March 25, 2004, Tracer
(99) wrote:
I feel the same way, nice write, here is to many more years of your talent! ^vTracerv^
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On Thursday, March 25, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
this place would be lost without talent like yours Cre... I've only been here 3 months but you have always made me feel welcome, and more than that, well, I reckon you're fantastic. Fox
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, DarkPoet
(229) wrote:
Here's hoping for many more. ~M
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On Monday, March 8, 2004, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Here's to many, many more. If you ever leave, I'll hunt you down, and kidnap you. Then I'll keep you in a cage in my room, and give you a computer only. :)
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
aawww...I feel the love in this one.
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On Monday, March 8, 2004, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
Always amazed when I read your work, it's like your able to say exactly what you need and want to...although I don't know if that is ever possible for a poet. It is like in this, you have picked up a picture of requiem and though life still happens you ca
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On Monday, March 8, 2004, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
carry this place with you and open up to it when ever needed. So beautiful Cre. And it's like your home and things are ok even when they are not right. Making sense? I hope so. ~JM~
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, MercyRain
(105) wrote:
heh... only a year... just another thing to make me feel old, damn you :P and i had thought you had been here much longer... but it's been fun... the sentiments, the chats... blessed be
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, cre
(410) wrote:
hehehe it's ok im old too :P and it has been fun . . i'll always remember those late late nites we spent chattin about you wantin a kitty :)
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A former member wrote:
Oh wow cre what a great way to put this, especially lines 5-8 in the first stanza. I'm glad that I found this place as well or I wouldn't have had the opportunity to open my mind to all of the wonderful pieces posted on this place daily. ~Ship!
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On Friday, February 27, 2004, Chaos-Slayer-
(7) wrote:
Ah, yes the place that makes one feel welcomed. A fine tribute to Darkpoetry.
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
solemnly share in these feelings in your heart, in this place demons I have unleashed, no one has turn their face of me...they embraced it. But I wouldn't be here if were not for real people like you who write what is real to them+Fallen One+ [
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
I feel very lucky to have found this place and to have had the chance to read so many great works. Its people like you who make this site a home in our hearts. Much respect. :::OLd
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
Wow ... such a touching and sparkly piece cre. Much poetry loves. [D&A]
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
ahh! yes, it is a marvellous little addiction...and i'm only on my third month... lovely write! purr
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A former member wrote:
*gets all tingly* Ooh...I love this so much. I feel exactly the same way. *hugs Cre* Yay Darkpoetry!
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
iv been here for almost a year, on and off, but something always drags me back, i havent made many friends but theres something about this place that fells good, nicly said Cre.~~~Grave
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
wow ... beautiful write , i've only been here a little while , but i can already see where this comes from ... funguy
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A former member wrote:
I feel much the same though it's been a little longer for me....I think this place shall be my high rise that i grow old and die in with 12 cats and a book of poetry to my name.
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
hey! i'm gonna have 9 cats! wanna move in together? ::grin:: cre could come too... we'd be horny crazy old cat ladies together >:)
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A former member wrote:
I thought I was bad with only 5 cats.
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
I've got 2 at the moment, but plan on Several in my elderliness... At this rate, we could form a community of crazy cat ladies. And that would rock. >:)
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On Thursday, March 25, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
I've got one cat and I'll swap her for whatever I can get. heehee. I always thought I'd be the old spinster ontop of the hill with cats - I didn't even think I'd get a book of poetry, but I like that addition!! Fox