Not Even In My Dreams

By cre

I sip on these, the filigreed dreams,
To decorate my days with lace,
And the softly shaded blue,
Of cherished photo-memories,
And whispers of my perfect you.
And sleep falls,
Like silk beneath the waves,
As this softly washing shadow,
Spills onto my tongue
With words of fabled days.
And bring to me, the breeze,
That breathes of faint perfume,
This illusion I had hoped,
To have in place of you . . .
Though still the sun, shall sigh into the day,
Stealing into puddles left,
When the moon has slipped away.
These mornings find you leaving,
As the time for sleeping fades.
Yet still I press my lips,
To this my fantasy,
Though I know that you were never true,
Not even in my dreams.

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Copyright 2004 cre
Published on Wednesday, February 11, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: the mist of dreams is more real than you think ...

  • Lynaes On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    Absolutely stunning. Thick and lush with beautifully worded imagery. I especially loved "Though still the sun, shall sigh into the day, Stealing into puddles left". I could see it all, so crisp and fresh. Gorgeous work. -L

  • Jonas On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    i felt like a piece of silk floating on the breeze, y'know how sometimes something gets trapped in a little playful breeze and just flies around? then at the last as always happens i crash into a puddle of mud and think about my flying days...

  • BoldSolitude On Saturday, April 3, 2004, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    Beautifully expressed

  • Mistress Morbid On Friday, February 27, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    There are good writers, and then there are excellent writers, but you are superb.

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (171)By person wrote:

    Very imaginative piece, excellent work, marvelous piece, great job ~Emptyness~

  • A former member wrote: Very sad, though sometimes our dreams offer what little comfort as might be had. Beautifully done. ~Ship!

  • SilentStalker On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...should I smile or frown...this kinda makes me want to do both...very nice the way you wrote this... -Darun Scholar

  • flying_fox On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    oh Cre, you've outdone yourself with this one. Splendid beauty in every line. love it. FF

  • Seraphic On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, Seraphic (209)By person wrote:

    *sigh* Just a deep breath, I think I felt my heart drop into my stomach, but that's a good thing, emotion is good :) *~seraph~*

  • sweetambrosia On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, sweetambrosia (80)By person wrote:

    I loved all the fantastic wording and imagery in this... it made me think of an elderly person looking back on their life, sad in the memories, but only sad because they were just memories now, and so long ago (not sure if that made any sense)... there ar

  • sweetambrosia On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, sweetambrosia (80)By person wrote:

    there are so many great lines in this that I cannot laud just one. --sweets

  • A former member wrote: Cre! *does the happy dance* I've missed your works so! This is completely and utterly beautiful even in its despair. "I sip on these, the filigreed dreams" excellent line. Brilliant wording :)

  • frost bite On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, frost bite (43)By person wrote:

    this was really cool, I think we can all relate to this, it's nice to read your work again, it's been a while.

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    You poured your heart out into this, I can feel the need for what you cannot have, great write.

  • knightmirror On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    WOW.amazing piece.nicely written with magnificent wordplay.*thumbs up*

  • purr_verse On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    oh so beautiful and so heartrending; and a feeling i've had more than one time myself. wonderful write. :) purr


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