Lucky Me(burning in Hell)

By SGT Bloth

All alone
skine and bone
nothing to eat
ohh this terrible heat
i am nailed too the wall
crucified me
why did you leave
please.....water for my head
where did you go
I miss my death
burning in hell
what did i do
to be so lucky?

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Copyright 2003 Bloth Andii
Published on Tuesday, October 28, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: the pain never stops some one is always hurting, happiness is just an illusion s/m

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, November 27, 2003, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    I disagree. Happiness is as real as you make it. the only difference is pain can be physical. I guess thats why it seems "realer". Thats my take, anyway. Good write Bloth.

  • Drea On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    i pose the same question O did. could the pain actually continue after life?.. i believe it can. nicely written ~Drea~

  • Ophelia On Thursday, October 30, 2003, Ophelia (221)By person wrote:

    does the pain stop with death, makes one wonder doesn't it, ........O.

  • Rebel_Angel On Wednesday, October 29, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    wow this is cool

  • SGT Bloth On Thursday, October 30, 2003, SGT Bloth (162)By person wrote:

    HEHE!!Wow! i think somebody likes me! Yayyyyyy.... i love people who casn relate to my deepest thoughts.....You are pretty cool yourself rebel.... i like your works alot too..keep in touch....BLOTH ANDII

  • A former member wrote: a different way of saying you wish for death. cynicism is fun sometimes. write on man. U.P.

  • Crystal Passion On Thursday, October 30, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    agrees and hands you the earnings from her tip cup today you deserve that much :P XXkRYzXX

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Errr. well, err.. ok, I'll just tell you wellcome to DP.. Da monkey


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