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Lucky Me(burning in Hell)
By SGT Bloth
All alone
skine and bone
nothing to eat
ohh this terrible heat
i am nailed too the wall
crucified me
why did you leave
please.....water for my head
where did you go
I miss my death
burning in hell
what did i do
to be so lucky?
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Copyright 2003 Bloth Andii
Published on Tuesday, October 28, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Lucky Me(burning in Hell)"
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A former member wrote:
the pain never stops some one is always hurting, happiness is just an illusion s/m
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On Thursday, November 27, 2003, Alanarchy
(1200)
wrote:
I disagree. Happiness is as real as you make it. the only difference is pain can be physical. I guess thats why it seems "realer". Thats my take, anyway. Good write Bloth.
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On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
i pose the same question O did. could the pain actually continue after life?.. i believe it can. nicely written ~Drea~
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On Thursday, October 30, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
does the pain stop with death, makes one wonder doesn't it, ........O.
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On Wednesday, October 29, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
wow this is cool
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On Thursday, October 30, 2003, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
HEHE!!Wow! i think somebody likes me! Yayyyyyy.... i love people who casn relate to my deepest thoughts.....You are pretty cool yourself rebel.... i like your works alot too..keep in touch....BLOTH ANDII
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A former member wrote:
a different way of saying you wish for death. cynicism is fun sometimes. write on man. U.P.
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On Thursday, October 30, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
agrees and hands you the earnings from her tip cup today you deserve that much :P XXkRYzXX
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On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Errr. well, err.. ok, I'll just tell you wellcome to DP.. Da monkey
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