Unholy Water

By The Fallen Angel

I served my lord with all my life
In my core, all my might
A dedicated heart for you
A lamb for burn, a gift to you

Day and night, sacrificed
Flesh, bone and living light
Now my demons comfort me
No longer Will I Question you
No longer Will I pray to you

Always falling on my knees
Remaining silent to my pleads
Never speaking physically
A child forgotten spiritually

New water feels this empty cup
A broken marriage lost its touch
Burning flames of hate for you
Ignite my heart to and through

Never feeling guilty of
Being worthy of your love
To call upon your empty name
Is paper flowers, castaline dames

On a path of my own
A Fallen Angel in alone
To understand eternity
Draw the strings of destiny

You engender things of good
But I cannot thank you like I should
Your works they are deceitfulness
Alleviating your guiltlessness

I need Amelioration
Its Suffocation
Desecration
An Aquarian Damnation

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Published on Saturday, August 9, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Unholy Water"

On Thursday, May 6, 2004, Death (28) wrote:

I loved this poem. You three, you know who i mean, are truely awesome.
On Saturday, November 29, 2003, SGT Bloth (162) wrote:

I have been there...don't worry you.ll be back....BLOTH
On Sunday, November 30, 2003, The Fallen Angel (234) wrote:

maybe...maybe not...and if i do that would make me a coward in my case+Fallen One+
On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, _Andrew_ (245) wrote:

awesome... you're a very very good writer, nice job here, i sit here baffled *~*aNDReW*~*
On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Diva_Satanica (74) wrote:

you are blasphemous indeed. you write as if you are judgements little sibling ready to take on his dark ways.-D.S
A former member wrote: wonderful... i enjoyed a lot, we have a lot in common... i mean poem wise that is... compare if you'd like-UI
A former member wrote: I love the title, I love the flow. I don't like the message, but I do love this poem. Brilliant work.
On Sunday, August 10, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

I agree with Vel. This was a wonderful piece. I'm sure many of us have felt this way about one thing or another.
On Sunday, August 10, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434) wrote:

faith lost....could be religion, love..oh so many aveneues left open here..I love the visions that dance in my twisted mind...Thanks for sharing this ~Velvet~