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BLOOD LUST(STUPID WHORE!)
By SGT Bloth
YOU STUPID WHORE!
What did you think?
I only invited you here for a drink?
Well, you were right...
just one drink...
a drink of wine..
your red wine
What did you think?
What did you think?
THE CHALICE OF GOLD
to hold your soul
LIFE DRAINS FROM YOU
TO MAKE MINE NEW !!!
JUST ONE DRINK!
JUST ONE DROP!
Your neck, SO SOFT...
I JUST CAN'T STOP!!!
I'M SORRY GOD!!!!
WHAT I HAVE DONE?
GAVE HER ETERNAL LIFE
MADE US FOREVER ONE.....
Just one drink
Just one drop
THELUST IS UPON ME!!!!!
I JUST CAN'T STOP!!!
YOU STUPID WHORE!!!
What did you think?
A drunk like me
can't have just one drink.
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Copyright 2003 Bloth Andii
Published on Monday, October 27, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "BLOOD LUST(STUPID WHORE!)"
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A former member wrote:
Haha I like this! Very twisted, very nice
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On Saturday, February 9, 2008, Niemand
(361)
wrote:
I think I like when you're angry... -Geisha
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On Saturday, February 9, 2008, Niemand
(361) wrote:
And screaming :}
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On Monday, February 11, 2008, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
I'll remember that next time, I'm in your room..Hey, I'm out of meat so can you lock up the wolves this time?
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2008, Syringe
(51) wrote:
i love the how most of the words are capitalized. sounds like you're screaming
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On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, Green-eyed Raven
(54) wrote:
Wow. *Raven*
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
lol... this cracked me up. and the words in caps put the idea of your poem forward. very nice. :)
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A former member wrote:
WOW! thats cool lol! good work i like it a lot
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On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
mmmm blood letting, sexy, romatic, *quivers* i agree 100% with vel ~Drea~
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A former member wrote:
he he..this is pretty....good, very discriptive for one solid point
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A former member wrote:
Hehe I like this and found it kind of funny because I just watched "Once Bitten" the other day so kind of related this to that. Nice job. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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A former member wrote:
good write nice flow i havnt read a vampire piece for a while sparked some
inspiration thanks
keep it up
M.H.A.
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On Sunday, November 2, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
nice vampiric piece here....bloodletting is a sensual and erotic thing...(even when two engadge in real life) mmmmmmm
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On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
We need too talk Velvet
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A former member wrote:
You're almost as sick as Silent. Good stuff, bro. Welcome. -C-
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A former member wrote:
Nice work....... Ill check back.....your very creative and interesting....keep it up...nice write..... I love the last two lines...bye!
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On Sunday, November 2, 2003, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
Thank you very much Face-X -Less......i'll be sure to read up on you as well
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On Thursday, October 30, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
wowness! This is not at all what I expected and for that im quite pleased. (btw you're a cutie) XXkRYzXX
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On Sunday, November 2, 2003, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
What exactly did you expect crys? I guess you never know someone till you read thier mind....By the way i'm not the onlky cuttie in this conversation;)
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On Thursday, October 30, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
Have you ever played in the DARK Alleys of RavenBlack City, It is such a fun game, very nice write.................O.
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On Sunday, November 2, 2003, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
i sure havent ophelia, is it a board game? comp game? i'll have too check it out......P.S. thanks for the comment...i looovvveee hearing from people....Bloth
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A former member wrote:
this is REALLY good........ ~Witch~*
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On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...nice...I really like this one...guess I'll mark it for safekeeping... -Ferg
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On Monday, October 27, 2003, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
I'm trying to think of something profound to say, my mind is not working properly though...so saying I like it is well enough, good job *~seraph~* you ought to take a look at my poem, it's called "Blood Whores"
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