The Quatrain Has Left the Station

By dwells

The oldest were the first to feel the sting
Of death, designed to dash a hopeful spring;
And fear would stalk the land of righteous men
To bring them low, ere they could sin again

Then power passed from many to a few
Of what remained, they said “It all came true!”
Their minds unmoored from that which made them great
(while chains were forged behind the garden gate)

“Tomorrow we will do what needs be done”
They chanted underneath the cursed sun
The last were still as foolish as the two
Whose children would revile the right and true
 

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Copyright 2020 dwells
Published on Saturday, June 27, 2020.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Some things never change; only the actors on the stage, cheers!
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  • Gail Naegele On Friday, August 25, 2023, Gail Naegele (1)By person wrote:

    Powerful and poignant old friend, the first line was the most profound truth. And, I learned much from you way back, Nice to read your work again. Loretta Young

  • SolApathy On Friday, February 17, 2023, SolApathy (667)By person wrote:

    Where is our ghost rider?

  • SolApathy On Monday, May 16, 2022, SolApathy (667)By person wrote:

    I dwell on whether we will see your stunning words again....Your writes are always so amazing

  • Divine hell On Wednesday, September 30, 2020, Divine hell (249)By person wrote:

    we follow the same patterns and programs to cycle through this reality never really changing through the generations

  • JustAnEarlyBird On Tuesday, July 28, 2020, JustAnEarlyBird (39)By person wrote:

    I'm not sure I know which land is of righteous men- I find it hard to believe we aren't all a plagues of our own making- sin personified. But regardless of me being cynical, I do love this piece. I feel like I'm reading a prophecy-- and like Im watching it come true. Thanks for sharing!!

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, July 2, 2020, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Wonderful piece! Great words for sucky times. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Phalanx On Monday, June 29, 2020, Phalanx (679)By person wrote:

    Can't help but think of Adam and Eve.

  • Drea On Saturday, June 27, 2020, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    Very deep. These words sting because of the truth in them. Well written as always. Much respect.

  • dwells On Monday, June 29, 2020, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    Right-on P! I refuse to say "spot-on" lest I be accused of Anglophilic cultural appropriation. Many thanks Miss Nat, Specter and Drea too - long time my friends! - cheers, Dan

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