the number one way to make him hot ;)

By KittyStryker

outside
cool air caressing skin
gaze into his eyes
whisper
into his ear
those
three
little
words

"strip
naked
now"

step back
cross
those long legs
watch his gaze
follow them up
up
up
to the hem of your skirt
just
barely
covering that wet cunt
perhaps
you chose today
as a day to wear
those black lacy panties
or that vinyl thong
or
just your own
musky
scent

he'll just have to guess

probably why
when he slides those pants
down
down
down
to his ankles
his cock
is hard
and ready

but he won't be allowed
to use that yet
oh no
because you plan
on setting him
aflame

little bit
of smooth cotton rope
and a slim tree
bind that boy
tight
against the bark
unable to move
start
at his lips
and lick
a little trail
past his nipples
to his bellybutton
one tongue flick
across the tip
of his swollen cock

smile
to see it
strain
to reach you
lightly run your fingernails
along his sides
make him moan
with his desire
for your skin

kneel
in the dry grass
around his feet
and take his precious cock
into your soft
warm
wet mouth
tease every inch
with your lips
your tongue
let your eyes
flick up
to meet his
suck
ever so gently
and when his head
presses
against the bark
when he cries out
for satisfaction

take one step away

take out your cigarette
strike a match
light it
bring it to your red lips
one
deep
drag

flick the matchstick
right
at his feet
orange red fire
smokes hot
and lights
the earth
beneath him

savor
his sizzling sweat
the fear in his eyes
as the heat
licks
his naked skin
and singes
his hair
close your eyes
and relish
the sound
of his desperation
his screams of pain
useless struggles
as the bark ignites
taste
his tears
and boiling blood
in the breeze

oh
he'll burn for you
i promise

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Copyright 2003 ~Bast~
Published on Sunday, September 28, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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Comments on "the number one way to make him hot ;)"

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  • A former member wrote: Wow... breathless and speechless... sexy and tormenting up until it twists to become a sadistic dream. Very nice

  • A former member wrote: Lighting a fire UNDER someone will never be as effective as lighting a fire WITHIN someone...

  • flying_fox On Wednesday, June 14, 2006, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    bloody hell... great write. Am pathetically without a decent comment, but hot hot hot it is.

  • saellem On Friday, June 10, 2005, saellem (21)By person wrote:

    i love your work.... so so soooo sexy.

  • stormtalk On Tuesday, July 20, 2004, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    This freakin' rocks. I'm all for seduction poems that turn into something twisted at the end... and there's nothing like a nice immolation. Good combo!

  • NikesRain On Thursday, July 15, 2004, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    .. this is so profoundly erotic and wicked. Outstanding my dear!

  • scorpionstale On Thursday, July 15, 2004, scorpionstale (21)By person wrote:

    Holy shit! That was awesome, just enough to turn you on and BAM. Damn! You rock.

  • Solace On Sunday, March 21, 2004, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    THIS WAS KIN TO GODLINESS! *bows humbly* I am in utter awe before you, i submit...

  • smurfalwaz On Thursday, December 18, 2003, smurfalwaz (13)By person wrote:

    WOW...the end was VERY unexpected...this is a great poem!

  • A former member wrote: Well, that Fish sure as hell isn't undercooked...

  • ColdScaredAlone On Sunday, October 5, 2003, ColdScaredAlone (77)By person wrote:

    ha, have i ever told you you're my idol?

  • HeLlSeND On Friday, October 3, 2003, HeLlSeND (40)By person wrote:

    Damn....you had me all bothered there for a minute......you wait....i'll get you back for this.....you hear me....you tease!!!!...... ;)

  • IceDragoness On Thursday, October 2, 2003, IceDragoness (193)By person wrote:

    lol this is great, but i think this'd be for a guy you didnt like though.. ~Dawn

  • KittyStryker On Thursday, October 2, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    nah, i save this for the boys i cherish...

  • shadowsinthelight On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, shadowsinthelight (146)By person wrote:

    the number one way to make him hot or how to fire roast a fish.

  • KittyStryker On Wednesday, October 1, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    ::laughs:: can't wait til he reads it... hehehe...

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    what a twist... i like it but please don't burn me lol my wife is a pyro and likes it a LOT

  • A former member wrote: Hot...very hot. Such firey passion! LOL...this made my day and night! (I've read it many times now)

  • Delilah On Monday, September 29, 2003, Delilah (113)By person wrote:

    Wish you would've posted this when I was with some of my exex...this is GREAT Kitty...~Delilah~

  • A former member wrote: Oh this is beautiful, drew me in with the erotic overtones and dropped my jaw when I read the rest. Wonderful job, absolutely wonderful.

  • Drea On Monday, September 29, 2003, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    i LOVE IT.. hehe.. well that's a sure fire(pun intended)way to get him hot..heheh love this..~Drea~

  • KittyStryker On Monday, September 29, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    ::sighs:: is Velvet the only one who gets this? getting him hot... the poem is about BURNING HIM AT THE STAKE. yes. human flesh sizzling in the night.

  • Drea On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    awwww pour kitty...there is nothing better then setting a man on fire..::looks at my bf:: i said that out loud and now he runs..pussy......~Drea~

  • KittyStryker On Sunday, November 30, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    i like them smooth and spicy on the outside, and gooey on the inside... and rare, of course... i like my meat bleeding.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Monday, September 29, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    was this only one way??? ennyways, this is a good write. Not brilliant poetry, but good.. :o) Peter

  • A Velvet Tongue On Monday, September 29, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    LMao indeed indeed it is a way to get him hot...Im glad I inspired this...There are so many creative ways to enjoy one another...if only ppl would get off their lazy asses and let creativity flow!!

  • KittyStryker On Monday, September 29, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    ::grins:: you set the fire to my inspiration...

  • A Velvet Tongue On Monday, September 29, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    Glad to know I can set some kind of fire, somewhere!! lol

  • KittyStryker On Monday, September 29, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    ::laughs:: fan the flames, baby, fan 'em good...

  • Drea On Sunday, September 28, 2003, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    i LOVE this. i think i need to make a call to my bf now..hehehe great write great read..i'm goin to read it again and again and again..oops...sorry hehehe ~Drea~


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