How a Poem is Born

By Stranger

My mind like a womb
Teeming with a thousand milk white words
The segmented larva of bees or ants
Fighting and writhing their way
Into the birth canal of my arm
Gravity and the vacuum of my hand
Leading them single file to
The swelling abdomen of my pen
Where they emerge one by one
From its tiny vaginal tip
Squirming and twisting
Plop.. plop... plop...
Onto hospital white paper
Their chameleon skin changing
With my moods and my breathing
They begin to order themselves
Like school children before their headmaster
"Who remembers our lesson?"
I ask, threatening with my ruler



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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Monday, July 14, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, November 15, 2017, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    This should have been POTD a hell of a lot sooner. Fantastic gem of a piece.

  • A former member wrote: Interesting.

  • HalfDarkAngel On Monday, November 13, 2006, HalfDarkAngel (59)By person wrote:

    wow this is incredible

  • mywristshurt On Saturday, April 29, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    ooooooooooooooook

  • purr_verse On Saturday, November 20, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    Simply excellent. The conclusion is perfect.

  • aXe FactoR On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, aXe FactoR (333)By person wrote:

    awesome... great great imagination. dig this. -MeL-

  • Mistress Morbid On Thursday, March 4, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    This is amazing, your words blow me away.

  • A former member wrote: this paints a very vivid picture. I love it

  • IceDragoness On Tuesday, August 19, 2003, IceDragoness (193)By person wrote:

    Incredible! very well worded and i loved the imagery as well, great work ~Dawn

  • A former member wrote: Love it. I absolutely love it. You should give this to high school teachers, its truly a great description of the process of poetry. Beautifully done. ^aura^

  • Clementine On Friday, July 25, 2003, Clementine (121)By person wrote:

    Stars dont give a flying fuck....we're all little bee stings

  • Blinded_Tiger On Friday, July 25, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    This was both fun and interesting to read. I realy loved the end.

  • SnowQueen On Tuesday, July 22, 2003, SnowQueen (59)By person wrote:

    Very creative. You are a true poet.

  • Aurora_Light On Tuesday, July 15, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    hehe i like nice job

  • hate_doll On Monday, July 14, 2003, hate_doll (263)By person wrote:

    This is crazy. I love the imagery and message. This is most definitely going in my faves...

  • A former member wrote: magnificently written.Youve captured the whole process with so much passion,really nice piece..xxx...

  • Jonas On Monday, July 14, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    many different elements of the process you've captured, magificently... i especially dig on the last bit 'o schoolyard imagery... everything previous is feral, wild, carnal, w/o order or anything but the progression as natural as birth...

  • Jonas On Monday, July 14, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    and as you spew forth new life it's all you can do to keep it in place, in line

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