Slipping Time

By cre

I linger in the midst of thoughts
The sun striking me no less
Than the moonlight to which my heart
Had cleaved
And I leave
Though they say I stay
But they do not traipse tripping
Through a melody of silence and
Seconds
Seasons of time that float and cluster
Like bubbles of drool
In a dribbling pool
While I ponder, pensive
I feel on my finger tips the
Tick tock
Of
A clock
A hand telling the hour
Telling me now that moments are fleeting and vague
And ripple slipping by like silky liquid pearls
Floating my vision
And
Drowning my dreams
Though now the light of night floods on
So soon shall it meet the dawn
And in betwixt am I
Lingering, languishing
In something less than the degradation
Of merely passing time.

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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Tuesday, June 3, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • CharlottesWeb On Sunday, October 19, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509)By person wrote:

    Some times I wonder, is the poet looking for the feelings inspired in the reader by the poem, or a correct relation from the reader to what the poem means to the author? For me...this is slipping time into a puddle of mirrored present actions. I really li

  • CharlottesWeb On Sunday, October 19, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509)By person wrote:

    like it. ~JMDW~

  • A former member wrote: i must agree with Fish on this one. Your intelligence, emotion, and artistry shines brilliantly, and is twice as intriguing. I love it. :)

  • CharlottesWeb On Sunday, October 19, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509)By person wrote:

    I second everything he said. ~looks above~

  • A former member wrote: ah, like being trapped in a blackhole where time is both everything and nothing...had to read it a few times to get that full impact...loverly...

  • CharlottesWeb On Sunday, October 19, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509)By person wrote:

    Sigh...Sharon summarized it perfectly. I could not think of the right words. Yes...time is what we have and it is everything yet only perception and so nothing to those who don't let it be something.

  • A former member wrote: WOW........loved it

  • Jonas On Thursday, June 5, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    this was right up my alley... you are starlight with a pen, jane

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, June 5, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Wonderful imagery! I love this one! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • maddin foxxxy On Wednesday, June 4, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    marvelious...excellent write...loved the flow...the message...everything..again a remarkable piece!!

  • Ravenblade On Tuesday, June 3, 2003, Ravenblade (307)By person wrote:

    I loved this one Jane, its been so long since I've read your work, I feel like I've really been missing out. This poem is so beautifully worded, and the flow is awesome, and the rhythm keeps me interested, I just loved this poem. The great imagery of thi

  • Ravenblade On Tuesday, June 3, 2003, Ravenblade (307)By person wrote:

    *The great imagery of things not too many people try to picture like "bubbles of drool in a dribbling pool" heheheh, great stuff.* keep it up, I hate these 256 character limits

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, June 3, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    I agree with Doc. WOW. Jane. One day, you're gonna be like super famouse. You write tooo damn good. I think you sold your soul to the devil ;). Anyways, that was still amazing. Bravo. :[ *swoop*

  • DoctorAsh On Tuesday, June 3, 2003, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    UMM>[WOW]The Seventh Power. Your word configuration in this write is astonishing. This left me feeling kinda-insignificant: [Wonderful Type]/\[D&A]


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