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Bury Me In Decayed Embraces
By RubyXero
...I dreamt of you.
in shadowed envy.
Burning my heart with embers
and shattered glass.
As your mocking voice
gave pleas of salvation.
Upon this mountain of ruin
bearing on this complication
of contemplation.
Another SET of
blood, bone and ashes
curled under my toes.
Maggot infested bodies
splayed across and piled high.
..Mountains of their agony.
Each scenario played differently
yet concluding the same outcome.
The wind shivers
in relieved ecstasy
as I sheath my sword
heading toward more populated grounds.
Begin.
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© 2008 RubyXero
Comments on "Bury Me In Decayed Embraces"
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On Wednesday, February 17, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810)
wrote:
I am sorry I have missed your work, it won't happen again. I am so impressed. A dark visual that speaks volumes. I loved the line 'mountains of their agonies.' Perfect context, perfect flow. thanks.
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On Wednesday, January 21, 2009, Imsosickxxx
(80) wrote:
Very profound, great job! Oh, and dreamt is a word when spelled correctly =P not poking at the write just didn't know if you had spelled it wrong on purpose ~sick
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On Monday, January 26, 2009, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
ahhhh...total brain fart...thanks for that. :)
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On Saturday, December 13, 2008, MESUN
(230) wrote:
looks like someone forgot to lock the bottomless pit. i enjoyed this much.
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On Friday, December 5, 2008, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
RAW is the nature of this piece and I really enjoyed reading it.. several times actually.. I loved it aswell. ~669~
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On Friday, December 5, 2008, Joey
(31) wrote:
i love it. wonderful
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On Friday, December 5, 2008, Leith Plunkett
(239) wrote:
I love this. I wish it was in movie. That last word weighs heavy. Awesome write
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