Bury Me In Decayed Embraces

By RubyXero

...I dreamt of you.
in shadowed envy.
Burning my heart with embers
and shattered glass.
As your mocking voice
gave pleas of salvation.

Upon this mountain of ruin
bearing on this complication
of contemplation.
Another SET of
blood, bone and ashes
curled under my toes.
Maggot infested bodies
splayed across and piled high.
..Mountains of their agony.

Each scenario played differently
yet concluding the same outcome.

The wind shivers
in relieved ecstasy
as I sheath my sword
heading toward more populated grounds.

Begin.


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© 2008 RubyXero
Published on Friday, December 5, 2008.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • Malcholm Dark On Wednesday, February 17, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    I am sorry I have missed your work, it won't happen again. I am so impressed. A dark visual that speaks volumes. I loved the line 'mountains of their agonies.' Perfect context, perfect flow. thanks.

  • Imsosickxxx On Wednesday, January 21, 2009, Imsosickxxx (80)By person wrote:

    Very profound, great job! Oh, and dreamt is a word when spelled correctly =P not poking at the write just didn't know if you had spelled it wrong on purpose ~sick

  • RubyXero On Monday, January 26, 2009, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    ahhhh...total brain fart...thanks for that. :)

  • MESUN On Saturday, December 13, 2008, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    looks like someone forgot to lock the bottomless pit. i enjoyed this much.

  • sixsixnine On Friday, December 5, 2008, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    RAW is the nature of this piece and I really enjoyed reading it.. several times actually.. I loved it aswell. ~669~

  • Joey On Friday, December 5, 2008, Joey (30)By person wrote:

    i love it. wonderful

  • Leith Plunkett On Friday, December 5, 2008, Leith Plunkett (237)By person wrote:

    I love this. I wish it was in movie. That last word weighs heavy. Awesome write


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