exhaling .innocence.

By denver nitze

fading away like the thin trail
of smoke escaping the cherry of a cigarette
i secede to the inevitable demise
of the fairy tale sunset
and instead watch the moon rise
flirting silent over pyres of unalterable death
as imagination gives way to nitemaric devotions
and dreams become hauntings
with every breathe
exhaling
the seductions
of yet another and another...

...cigarette.

pharmaceutical cocktails become motivation
traces of poison left still lingering on my lips
plunging carrion pupils deeper
all while falling farther from...


happily...



...ever...



...after





...and...
blood covers paper poetic notations
while demons dance in the lingering smoke
of the last cigarette lit
and the one leap farther
from



.innocence.







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© 2008 denver nitze
Published on Tuesday, March 25, 2008.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Jonas On Monday, May 26, 2008, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    beautifully written and very engaging... the poem led me on a trip through my own mind with your shoelaces in my shoes, thanks.

  • NikesRain On Tuesday, March 25, 2008, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    decadent and darkly alluring... like flipping a butterfly knife over and over with a wink and a grin.... nicely done

  • denver nitze On Wednesday, March 26, 2008, denver nitze (256)By person wrote:

    thank you. i'm flattered you read it. ~ta~

  • A former member wrote: *inhales your exhalations* this was dark and dreamy.I love the title :)

  • denver nitze On Tuesday, March 25, 2008, denver nitze (256)By person wrote:

    *blows a little 'wacky' smoke her way too*, since you're inhaling. ;) thanks for the comment.

  • Moonflower On Tuesday, March 25, 2008, Moonflower (301)By person wrote:

    this was slow and melancholy. i liked it a whole lot :)

  • Narcissa On Tuesday, March 25, 2008, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    On a day like today this was perfect. Thank you. (I will return w/a better comment.)

  • Guillotine On Tuesday, March 25, 2008, Guillotine (172)By person wrote:

    excellent metaphors and lovely stilted rythym. I enjoyed this.

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Tuesday, March 25, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (359)By person wrote:

    I love the language used in this piece, all around a great write TA, *salutes*


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