mood: alone

By cre

music in the background

dreams run down my face

dying and I'm breaking

this is not the place

not the place I thought it was

now I sigh alone

in the arms of no one

and I don't know

I just don't know

there should be more

but the dark will overwhelm me

and I will slide to the floor

and cradle my own head

in the arms of no one

in tears alone

and I don't know

I just don't know anymore

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Published on Wednesday, April 30, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "mood: alone"

A former member wrote: aloniness is all i want and choose to feel... nice poetry
On Sunday, June 1, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509) wrote:

The utter loneliness and awkward lost feeling that accompanies it, gleamed through like a dull heart beat in a mass grave. I could have fallen right into this and off my chair. ~DW~
On Saturday, May 17, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

You successfully captured the feeling of hopelessness we all feel at times...when the reality sets in that, despite the facade, we are truely alone. Ciao, T/S
A former member wrote: Beautiful, i enjoyed this much!
A former member wrote: A wonderful piece which allows me to get in touch with how I feel now as well. So dark and so brilliant! Great piece, you!
On Friday, May 2, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (55) wrote:

you describe the feeling of being alone so well in this poem, it was so dark and sad and wonderful to read, thanks for sharing
On Thursday, May 1, 2003, Jonas (715) wrote:

breaking, like the sound of glass, shattered and muffled...
On Thursday, May 1, 2003, Armand (54) wrote:

"dreams run down my face" - oh man... i LOVE this line... it says it all so eloquently succinctly. if you werent so popular, i might be inclined to steal it. great piece.
On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

Wow, jane, just wow. It left me with a feeling of helplessness knowing that one of my good friends is in this situation. I hope it gets better.
On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

rocking and tragic and it's like I felt the racking sobs you didn't even disclose with words. Tired, and I just don't know anymore.
On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, DoctorAsh (371) wrote:

ahh ... this is more like it .. lets go stab eachother with dull forks .... nice write cre,