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Red All Over
By flying_fox
Lying in a fragile night
warmed by a fantasy glow
the red beaded candle shade
illuminating such subtle motion
skin so pale, inviting
upon red satin sheets
soft focus vaseline lens
raven hair, dark eyes, red lips
long lithe luscious limbs
red nails tipping graceful fingers
caressing delicate breasts
pink nipples pinched red
plump lips parting to
embrace a red-nailed finger
moistened soft flesh reaching
and stroking below
back arching and sliding
drowning red silken sinking
as the pulsing starts to quicken
staining red the white snow
now the candle burns lower
dancing fire in its shelter
singing red for the last time
a fleeting fancy red real
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Copyright 2004 flying_fox
Published on Monday, March 15, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Saturday, October 28, 2006, verablue
(111)
wrote:
this flows beautifly. so many great lines, i'd be hard pressed to pick a favorite part.
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On Monday, May 10, 2004, Mute Serenade
(445) wrote:
I...uh....bu.... fabulous dahlink, simply mahvelous. I want to ravish someone now... erotically fantabulous, love you foxy-Sue
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On Monday, May 10, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
Very elegant and professional. Erotic and tasteful. The imagery is vivid and the red hue intensified every word.
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On Thursday, May 6, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Very descriptive...I think I need some ice water... : ) Ciao, T/S
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On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Guttercat
(30) wrote:
though I'm a scarlet kitten, I've been struck dumb by the intense eroticism of this piece... but the colour triggers my lust. *snarlz* ;p in jest, for I'm but an emasculated kitten...
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On Monday, April 26, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
ohhhh wow ~ss
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A former member wrote:
'staining red the white snow' ... wow; evocative/sensual/beautiful... and your rhymeMeter is wonderful...tempting...red...
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
oh this is wonderful, most enjoyable excperiance to read.~~~Grave
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Wonderfully sensual yet balanced at the same time... A beautiful expression.
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A former member wrote:
oh.. goodness! this piece drew me in eagerly, promising infatuation, but the pervasive abstraction into use of the colour... a tasteful and tantalizing balance struck. delectable and delicious!
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On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
beautiful imagery.i'm speechless.**** my dear fox.knight
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On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Oh my ::blushes and hides:: Good poem! -Morb
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On Monday, March 29, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
The first stanza set the mood perfectly, I love the way you capture the essence of a moment in words.
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A former member wrote:
I've got a dirty mind. Muahaha. This was great and extremely clever. You took one of the simple pleasures in life and framed it in a very timeless way. Awsome. ~Ryan
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On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Classy and blissful .. I felt like red...tasted red and soaked in red by reading this ..absolutely stunning!
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On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
I want to bathe in red :) what a wonderfully sensual write. :::OLd
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On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, birdwell
(140) wrote:
red visions swirl, and illuminate the lines so gracefully... so glamorous ~db~
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A former member wrote:
wonderful.
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
illuminating such subtle motion .... ends up as quite an understatement - you kept it red ... you kept it vivid .... think the magic word may be ... sensuous ... yeah that works ... funguy
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A former member wrote:
"dancing fire in it's shelter" was such a pleasure to read.
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Your indeed talented, I love your work. This is passionate and beauty and spectacular! Kirsten`
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
very passionate...i like how the repetition of the color red invites you to read the next stanza...eager to see how it will appear...*afraid*
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Yummy. This piece made me think of a turtle I used to have...LONG story. But, good nonetheless. Very good Foxy Lady.
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
gorgeous!! i especially love the closing stanza - so evocative and beautiful; and such a lovely sensuality throughout. :)
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Wow, I LOVE the style of description in this. Gorgeous and vivid, strong and you've used the theme of red supremely. Excellent piece I love it. ~L
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A former member wrote:
Ooh so beautiful, loved the way each verse had an element of the color red... Lovely. ~Wish Upon A Star
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