Comments by ebonyamore

"I got a fully different view on this than what seems to be the general consensus...makes me wonder if I totally misread it. But to me it was laced with sarcasm...one of those snarky "shhhhh...you're so pretty" things..lol. like, "I envy how you're so simple that even your clothes seem blonde". but I think I might like the alternate interpretation even better."
Posted by ebonyamore on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Oh...god. every single word of this I have felt and felt deeply. Your words were like..well...I could come up with dozens of trite and cliche comparisons to physical pain. But given what you wrote I'm assuming I don't have to. Just..I understand. Beautifully written, if painful."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Internal Storm (ii)" by boneplate

"lol..ok thank god i'm not the only one because really..lol. we've been in the chat singing 'chestnuts roasting on an open fire' and 'ring of fire' and....*giggles*"
Posted by ebonyamore on "Great Balls of FYAH!!!" by Dick_in_my_Ass

"odd...though i is not december I can hear nat king cole's voice right now. i'm not sure what the appropriate response to this piece would be...i'm pretty sure hysterical laughter isn't it but i'm gonna be honest and say I laughed at this. I'm really glad you weren't hurt too severely but I laughed at this. "
Posted by ebonyamore on "Great Balls of FYAH!!!" by Dick_in_my_Ass

"'k...I vote he makes breakfast next time. But I'll still make the coffee. *smiles*"
Posted by ebonyamore on "Breakfast with ebony" by Musik2MyEyes

"thank you. its a true story and one that I've carried with me for a long time."
Posted by ebonyamore on "once upon a time..." by ebonyamore

"this is one of the loveliest, most graceful tributes I've had the privilege to read"
Posted by ebonyamore on "A Thing of Beauty" by Gray Vision

"the last two stanzas of this are amazing. in particular the last line is a truly great line of poetry. "
Posted by ebonyamore on "fear in acute exposure." by Saint Sentient

"the third stanza was immaculate and the ending was beautiful"
Posted by ebonyamore on "Her Eyes In Twilight" by ANGELSLAYER

"I don't feel like I have a comment that's worthy of this right now...but damn was it a good read. "
Posted by ebonyamore on "Caress Me With Darkness (written with Mab)" by ANGELSLAYER

"I read this 5 times, each more slowly than the time before and every time I read it, it got deeper and better. You don't use many words here but you say SO MUCH. and that last couplet was like a slap to the face. I've been using the word "profound" a lot lately, but that couplet felt like lightning to me. despair, anguish, bone deep coldness. and within the resignation of the sentiment was the a tiny seed of something nameless that from this vantage point looks a little like peace? or maybe I'm just rambling. but I did really enjoy this read."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Finding an End..." by A Life Without You

"oh my god. this caused me so much pain and sorrow. nobody should have to know this. i hope that life gives you equal measures of joy and peace and that you know the full amount of your courage and grace for being able to release it in words this way. "
Posted by ebonyamore on "HOW DID IT FEEL?" by Musik2MyEyes

"that's twice in one day you've left me nearly speechless. this was utterly unexpected and so very lovely. the charm of your words is surpassed only by the grace of the author and I feel awed at such a tribute. Thank you so very much!"
Posted by ebonyamore on "Breakfast with ebony" by Musik2MyEyes

"the title of this one drew me in and it was really the perfect name for this piece. it's a very unique concept and was a refreshing piece to read. very nicely written."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Memories A la Carte" by Musik2MyEyes

"been there. (think in one way or another we all have). you wrote the whole painful, messy experience well. thank you."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Being used?" by Musik2MyEyes

"uh no..lol. bryan adams never sang that in a song...or said it to me personally. someone i know a little better than that said it to me *wink wink*"
Posted by ebonyamore on "I said I loved you..." by ebonyamore

"this was a nice write. I really enjoyed reading this one!"
Posted by ebonyamore on "Gehenna" by SinneR

"this is a neat approach to acrostic poetry. the stream of consciousness style made it flow nicely without seeming forced in any way. well done!"
Posted by ebonyamore on "My new favourite thing" by Qurious

"very clever with a neat rhyme scheme. it was almost like reading a surgeon's general style warning on a magic 8 ball response but that was the absolute charm in it...well written!"
Posted by ebonyamore on "Would you prefer a lie or the truth?" by Qurious

"interesting twist on an incredibly sensual piece of music. I really enjoyed this. worthy of the title it bears."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Night music" by Qurious

"This is really beautiful. I love the image. Being able to will your other senses into making a reality out of a very strong desire...this was a flawless poem, really. Nicely written!"
Posted by ebonyamore on "Midnight Orchids" by Leith Plunkett

"the title to this piece is where i'm at right now because i'm not sure what to say to you. is it appropriate to say i loved reading this when its clearly borne of pain and loss? or do i simply say a trite 'my condolances' and not acknowledge the moving tribute you've written? this time i don't know what to say but 'thank you' and 'i'm sorry'"
Posted by ebonyamore on "I know the words but I can't speak" by Huey Lewis

"I'd have to agree....tsk tsk. so join me, won't you SG? *winks*"
Posted by ebonyamore on "the Shining Yen and the Alluring Yang" by tinkdarkchyld

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