A Thing of Beauty

By Gray Vision

Someone so perfect,
Perfect body and mind.
Virgin lips,
Never spoken an ill word,
I stroll pass her every day,
Never knowing her thoughts,
Thoughts of someone such as I,
Not a tease,
But jealous,
Jealous that someone so beautiful,
Roams the very earth as I,
A woman among girls,
Someone pure, kind, loving,
An awakening sight.
Aroma,
A breath of fresh air,
Her voice harmonious,
I can only wonder,
Will she ever notice me for me?
Has she noticed me?
These questions haunt my mind,
Like a bad dream with no end in sight.
If I ever doubted that there’s a God,
I’m certain there is now.
When creating her,
He had to have taken some time.
Time,
Sculpting those attractive curves,
Time,
Shaping those luscious lips,
Time,
Pondering her contagious smile,
Time,
Working swagger into each graceful step,
To stroke my fingers through her hair,
Could only be,
A thing of beauty.

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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Thursday, April 8, 2010.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

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  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, November 15, 2017, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    Ah, sweet romantic mystery...This was lovely and well written.

  • A former member wrote: beautifully surmised.

  • WillowGreybird On Friday, October 31, 2014, WillowGreybird (23)By person wrote:

    Gorgeous, both the writing and the image it procures. Very romantic, and a nice break from some of the more macabre love poetry. Manages to maintain darkness while still exuding light and happiness. Kudos!

  • Star On Sunday, February 24, 2013, Star (879)By person wrote:

    truly beautiful, sweet, and romantic.. love this (:

  • ColorMeToxic On Saturday, March 24, 2012, ColorMeToxic (238)By person wrote:

    This is incredibly sweet. :) Scholar

  • Gray Vision On Saturday, March 24, 2012, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    You all are a thing of beauty, thanks for dropping by everyone and take care of yourselves =)

  • Miztaken4beauty On Thursday, April 8, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (176)By person wrote:

    Great write. The imagery was striking. Even I had someone come to mind. =]

  • Gray Vision On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    And that's my que to keep writing hehe, thank you =)

  • ebonyamore On Thursday, April 8, 2010, ebonyamore (100)By person wrote:

    this is one of the loveliest, most graceful tributes I've had the privilege to read

  • Gray Vision On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    The pleasure was all mine ebony I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, thanks again =)

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