Her Eyes In Twilight

By ANGELSLAYER

I don't exactly know
What it is I had hoped to find here
No matter what I expected
I couldn't be prepared

For the twilight in your eyes

A soul broken so many times
A heart embittered by the lies
Emotions
Jagged cuts from a dull knife

I see her eyes despise

I had the purest intentions
I only wanted to heal
I ended up injecting more disease
Your fate I seemed to seal

I couldn't stand the hate in your eyes

Maybe now you're the one I want you to be
Now you can be the one to torment me
I want so to be punished
So I know that you love me

How I love the darkness in your eyes
And the way they bring the Twilight

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Published on Sunday, February 7, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Her Eyes In Twilight"

On Friday, December 14, 2012, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

...I was pulled in by the title. dark eyes are dangerous. great write...
A former member wrote: This is really good. This says alot about love and life. Your poetry is beautiful. Love it.
On Tuesday, April 6, 2010, ebonyamore (100) wrote:

the third stanza was immaculate and the ending was beautiful
A former member wrote: i loved how you were honest in your writing. lovely poem
On Thursday, March 25, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (176) wrote:

Beautiful. Tragic. Sometimes though, its easier to run and hate.
A former member wrote: Beautiful , a very lovely read thank you for sharing
A former member wrote: This was beautiful. I can feel the emotions. Thanks so much for sharing.
On Monday, March 1, 2010, ANGELSLAYER (116) wrote:

your opinion means very much, and thank you.
On Saturday, February 27, 2010, happilydepressed (400) wrote:

could be a song i could hear now
On Saturday, February 27, 2010, RubyXero (481) wrote:

definitely a strong sense of uncertainty here. Like you are struggling against who you wish you were and who you are. I enjoyed it. All of it
A former member wrote: Wow, beautiful! I loved it. =)