Comments by All Members
- "life is always a ticking time bomb... and we never know when it's going to go off... or out. This presaged your bang quite well.... quiet as it was... perhaps some explosions are not witnessed, but only felt... and these are the ones that do the most damage, not to the world, but to the self, maybe. Your pen will not remain closed, nor will your keys be kept on hold... enjoy the vacation, and thanks for being a poet for so many aspiring writers."
Posted by The Dybbuk on ".combustion." by Six-Out
- ""and I pretended that you would never / fall out of love" We lie to ourselves until it becomes true, it seems. That conclusion...is presence not everything? In both good or bad, presence is there a reminder. In a state of acceptance, marks of presence, those pictures that have been fingerpainted in the sky, are beautiful. Thank you for this."
Posted by thyyic on "with black on gray" by Six-Out
- "i love the fact that it's short but still gives a good message. "
Posted by Unknown on "waking." by Six-Out
- "This write is AMAZING for lack of a better word... I'm speechless on this really nothing I could say would ever be good enough to describe something so amazing... thanks for sharing! "
Posted by Unknown on "dreamscaped -sighs [whisper me away]" by Six-Out
- "Aw. What a lovely piece- it somehow has a hint of melancholy in it with how He may not be her superhero but the last line brightens it up entirely, how he'll never stop pretending. Great work :)"
Posted by Symbol on "superhero [capes.and.captivation]" by Six-Out
- "this is a much more innocent and loving version of yourself. Interesting to read. So different from the way you wright now"
Posted by Dei on "Glass Dolls" by Six-Out
- ""and hope that these words can pull love
from those eyes of hers." I rarely ever comment on your works because lets face it you have enough fans and by now you should know how amazingly gifted you are...but every now and then you pen out something so beautiful even I feel the need to leave my appreciation. this was hopeful and lovely in every way *tips hat* ~k
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Posted by Sin on "heart.cage capacity." by Six-Out
- "oh my hangover head has been on this ghost ship~thank you for such a concise write! love the line: "the water isn't cold - if I can't feel it" ! please save some of your vital forces to continue building the scaffolding we need to hang our hats on in the universe. You are much more than dark poetry~you are dark matter! The 83% of structure to the glittering galaxies. I really feel people are divided like cosmic matter. All the attention goes to the supernovae and constellation's concrete wonders. boring~obvious. Much more to be admired: the dark entities that hold those wonders in place throughout time. The poets, who chafe and curse the reality into this star struck life, and when it is too much intergalactic bling, we can make it all disappear with our black hole pen ink in the unlight of our true day. "
Posted by ruthless48 on "empty ships. [lost hope in a halo]" by Six-Out
- "This felt frantic to me. As though if the words would just come you would have the perspective you need but time works against you. May be off in my understanding but enjoyed it all the same."
Posted by Dilated View on ".combustion." by Six-Out
- "you know, it's aching when a woman writes her pain, but when a man so eloquently expresses his emotion....it's heartbreaking."
Posted by natalie on "pillow.talk" by Six-Out
- "this seemed of one mind, one heart in pain. you two rocked this piece!!! congrats on poem of the day!!"
Posted by natalie on "Circle Yes or No" by Six-Out
- "I love this! I have attempted suicide once before I and completely agree with you. Suicide is the cowards way out. It's a harsh truth but a truth none the less."
Posted by Unknown on "My Suicide Rant (revised)" by Six-Out
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