superhero [capes.and.captivation]
By Six-Out
she's screaming heartbreaks
and bleeding art. again.
and it's always the ones that slipped away
that hurt the most to think of.
she used to say.
and his web is tangled. stringing
words of silk. -and a little
venomous.love.
and he speaks of the missing s
on his chest. but she still
calls him her spiderman
it takes two to tango- but only one to trip
slip a little. and fall to the ground.
she's karma intangible.
his mistakes coming back to praise him
and it's beautiful when she speaks secret seances
singing broken hues of misfortune.
and he breathes into her ear
'I'm no superhero
but that doesn't mean I won't try'
her voice is steady. stabalizing in moments of epiphanies
and with her eyes wild with desire.
she'll break bread with the slightest of notice.
and he sleeps in portraits of her plights.
wanting to ignite her eyes again.
and he speaks.
'I'm no suuperhero.'
and she voices.
'just try for me.'
and in the end it's never futile. or useless.
when her eyes turn glass as he whispers.
in her ear.
'I'm no superhero.
but for you. I'll create with these hands'
and his text makes her tingle.
fingers weaving tales of heroics that he dreams.
she beams with desire.
and in the end. it's always the same.
he's never her superhero.
but she doesn't care.
because he's far more than exceptional
and she's far more than in need.
he's no superhero
but for her.
he'll never stop pretending.
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Comments on "superhero [capes.and.captivation]"
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On Sunday, November 12, 2017, worm
(1149) wrote:
come back... you are missed!
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A former member wrote:
Just amazing.
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A former member wrote:
wow you have my heart that was one of the finest poems I have ever read I loved it... wow.. dam that was great I am going to read more
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On Monday, October 16, 2006, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
you amaze me,I'm at a loss of words...
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On Tuesday, October 10, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
That was amazing. "he's no superhero but for her. he'll never stop pretending." I love it.
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A former member wrote:
Nicely Written. I liked the piece. "Im No Superhero, but that doesn't mean I wont try"
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On Tuesday, October 10, 2006, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
You are beautiful, darlin'
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On Sunday, October 8, 2006, Arianna
(105) wrote:
wow Jon...amazing. ~Amy
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On Sunday, October 8, 2006, Dei
(663) wrote:
Fantastic.
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On Sunday, October 8, 2006, i tremble
(29) wrote:
lovely. very lovely.
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On Sunday, October 8, 2006, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
one day, you'll write me a beautiful love poem. til then, i'll just sit and envy the poems you write for others. this is lovely.
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A former member wrote:
typical.
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On Saturday, October 7, 2006, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
you are such a romantic Jon.... this is divine... wonderful write absolutely filled with lyrical sublimity. Thank you.
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On Saturday, October 7, 2006, sIo
(898) wrote:
who did you write this about?
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On Saturday, October 7, 2006, mysterylove
(97) wrote:
"It takes two to tango - but only one to trip" ...so true. love this
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A former member wrote:
"he sleeps in portraits of her plights" - marvelous, dude...
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On Saturday, October 7, 2006, mozarts cat
(183) wrote:
'she's screaming heartbreaks / and bleeding art. again.' ..this is beautiful!