I'll kiss you [if you bite my tongue when I talk like this]
By Six-Out
smoke signal serenades in the form of poetry
slowly. graze. my lips. nothing is infinate
as these yesteryear spirits dance me into a midnight bliss
how fucking beautiful is this.
rip a sentance from my vein and turn it to ashes.
my breath blasphemous and my words are anonymous
I might as well be synonymous with failure
raising my voice an octave to scream my displeasures
and heartache. break my legs. because I can't take a step in your shoes.
the vibrations of my pulse create a bitter symphony
littered with left-over citations and unhealed lacerations.
and empathy is a metaphor. filter my objections.
and I'm no longer coping. it's hard.
and I'm disheartened to the point of hoping.
with hands like fists. and rocks like stones.
I'll cast a word. and hope to atone- lonely in bliss
sometimes I'd beg for innocence. and licks the lips
of a forgotten poem. . come home.
is the sentance I'm destined to ignore.
blessed with a facefull of promises- bleeding on the floor.
and these halls are like seances. walls barren.
covered in a story- written to bore.
I'm a bore. and we're a candle. burning the house down.
with empty frowns and rusty handles.
sometimes it's better to bury the past.
because it's always worse- when it never lasts.
and I'm a cast.
in a sense.
disregard this. as meaningless.
Awards
Comments on "I'll kiss you [if you bite my tongue when I talk like this]"
-
On Friday, October 5, 2012, Beautiful Incidental
(38) wrote:
this one came up randomly. i'd love to just sit and observe as one of these comes to life within you and emerges from you... fascination...
-
A former member wrote:
i wish i could get my stuff to flow like this, good job
-
On Saturday, January 26, 2008, Circe Avalon
(115) wrote:
wow this is very good, and I'm half asleep and commenting, it has to be good for me to put sentences together in this state.
-
A former member wrote:
wow,Jon. this blew me out of the water...thank you poem-a-day!
-
On Saturday, November 18, 2006, BeautifullyRuined
(93) wrote:
You amaze me.Everything you write is beatiful.
-
On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
You're right. I'm going to become obsessed with you, yet.
-
On Thursday, March 30, 2006, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
fabulous meter and subtle rhymes... makes this poem so sublime. :) WOnderful write Sixy.
-
A former member wrote:
I loved reading this poem. Dont know how or what to say about it, execpt its brilliant!!
-
A former member wrote:
You've got to be the best I've ran across so far.
-
On Wednesday, February 1, 2006, Dei
(663) wrote:
You never fail to please me.
-
On Thursday, January 26, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Damn. My senses twist around this but... Nah, I'm still wicked senseless. You still impress me.
-
On Tuesday, January 24, 2006, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
beautiful poem... but NOT ONE TO ME YOU BITCH! :P you are sooo getting a gay gangbang. you better get ready.
-
A former member wrote:
the title really works with this...giving the whole work another level of meaning and reinforcing the subtle passion throughout
-
A former member wrote:
if i said anything i think i'd kill this. it's delicate.. fragile in its own being. if i touched it i'm afraid it would shatter. it almost scares me.
-
On Thursday, January 19, 2006, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
intellectual and intelligent..............your words flow like water here..............artful and smooth.......urban
-
A former member wrote:
how fucking beautiful is this i love it
i want this poem im stealing
-
On Wednesday, January 18, 2006, sIo
(898) wrote:
...
-
A former member wrote:
"sometimes it's better to bury the past.
because it's always worse- when it never lasts" Heh yah. I'd say things like "But there's always a meaning" But, well, I'm a bore too so fuck it. Cool write.
-
On Wednesday, January 18, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
Wow I loved it; it took my breath away very very lovely
-
A former member wrote:
you are lovely. *fav*