she spoke sepia.
By Six-Out
she spoke sepia to me
like shallow smoke rings- we breathe
in the stars. nostalgia leads her.
to me. and I can't help but toss pennies
when she sings past tense elvis. and it's a dream
she's content. with just being.
and I'm in a trance. dancing to the faded brown
seeping from the lips she screams oblivion with.
listening to the rust. her eyes
almost as beautiful as the copper hitting the stream.
clicking. there's no flash when the past taunts
and these photographs laugh as she
speaks starburst extract. picasso couldn't
paint a picture more obscure than her present.
so I spit on her poetry trails. lingering
on the dust left from the amber.lacing
on her fingernails.
and she screams auburn at me.
like the leaves falling from the burnt letters
that my pen refuses to ink. majestic- isn't the right word.
but mine are far from the best.
and she speaks soft sorrel.
nights are never dark in her eyes.
I'm burning words and forming letters.
she screams. -photographs always hide the lies
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Comments on "she spoke sepia."
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A former member wrote:
Amazing work. The intermingling of thoughts with vivid imagery is just way too good here.
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A former member wrote:
The imagery in this was amazing, and the ending was killer. Such a beautiful poem. :)
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On Saturday, March 1, 2008, Circe Avalon
(115) wrote:
I love the vivid burnt siennas very powerful. Like pictures moving in my head to the dance of the poem. Or maybe I'm crazy, that's possible too. Any way this is a very good piece.
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A former member wrote:
fuck. spoken like a true prodigy.
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On Thursday, November 2, 2006, verablue
(106) wrote:
from reading this i suspect you are going to quickly make a fan of me. i'll surely be back for more.
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On Tuesday, October 24, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
i guess you are a pretty good poet...prettier than poe anyway
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On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, slow.burn.star
(84) wrote:
Vivid shadows and Soft edges of burnt orange drip over the edge, closer to my face. Sucking on a penny, to taste the blood.~ xxx
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On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
You should make a return.
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A former member wrote:
"Nights are never dark in her eyes"...Is it possible to want to live in your words? Create a nest of S's and periods so I can turn myself into something almost as beautifull. `Div
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On Tuesday, October 3, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
You truly have one of the most powerful voices in writing, that I've found. This one stomped around in my mind like a lyrical behemoth. I'm digging the hell out of this piece, dude.
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On Monday, October 2, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
!!! mmm. It's so pretty. And I have nothing intelligent to say because your words make me feel small.
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A former member wrote:
"and I can't help but toss pennies
when she sings past tense elvis. and it's a dream she's content. with just being." well, hot damn, jon. this was fucking spectacular. i can't decide which of the three i like best.
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On Monday, October 2, 2006, Arianna
(105) wrote:
ohfuckingwow Jon... this is amazing, just like the two before it. breathless you leave me with the picture you paint. ~amy
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On Monday, October 2, 2006, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
I read this several times, and each time it sank a little deeper in my mind..
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On Monday, October 2, 2006, sIo
(898) wrote:
this is beautiful