[mixed.drink] melodies

By Six-Out

it's like that song. everyone has it
the song that catches your ear as you drink your life away
lost in cheap vodka and bathroom stall romances
a lipstick collar.d memento- and nothing matters in the morning.

nobody cares about the dirty glasses- or forgotten melodies
that song. that one that you've never heard
but know so well.

and it never matters when your bottle tips to the side
no.

but you can always hear it ringing- taunting.
reminding of that time when you were happy-
that one time.

fuck.this.

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Copyright 2005 Six-Out
Published on Tuesday, March 15, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: love this , it speaks so deep.....i look forward to more awesome work like this

  • abattoir On Thursday, September 1, 2005, abattoir (115)By person wrote:

    if I could help myself I'd hate you for being so fucking great.this is a masterpiece.

  • A former member wrote: Awesome. This paints a very vivid picture. Great stuff.

  • A former member wrote: i love the first stanza. this poem so eloquently describes a feeling i put so much effort into forgetting; a feeling that, never-the-less, always returns. great job. .....-samone

  • AniDayz On Monday, March 21, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    always amazing...never ceasing...your talent...just @%$#!!^&!...this piece just grips and grasps...such nights and times and drunken truths and mirky waters i try and swim thru...this completely resonates w/me.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    "that song. that one that you've never heard but know so well." - yeah, I know it... Good one, man. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Malice In Wonderland On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    And you've hit the nail on the head yet again... Scholar

  • Whisper On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, Whisper (112)By person wrote:

    This write is brilliant. It describes me so well. ~matt~

  • A former member wrote: Shit.. "that one time." .. Gah, when you write like this I want to steal you away and make it better.

  • manywalks On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Sixy-baby, you never disappoint do you. Yes, this was brillant.

  • Lotophagi On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    brilliance.... I love the grunge, I love the regret, I love the cynacism and anger, and resignation..... the simile - just perfect. You rock. Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: Sounds like the way I feel every time I drink scotch. Though I don't need the alcohol to feel the bitter reminiscence it never hurts to help it unfold. Heh. ~Ryan

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    yea


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