Comments by All Members
- "This was a light, refreshing read. Some of us tend to forget how much fun poetry can be; it's not always about the heaviness of expressing intense emotions. Thanks for the laugh. "
Posted by Salty Ships on "Robin Hood Of Jellystone" by Malcholm Dark
- "I hate people who want to live forever. To be trapped on this earth with no escape from this, k can't imagine. To not be able to release yourself, that'd be awful. Great work."
Posted by Manperson96 on "I Am Forever" by Malcholm Dark
- "You have a strong vision of the subject you"ve chosen. To connect the pieces carefully, creating a whole image of that uncanny, living~yet~undead creature that draws fear like blood from the pores of all who behold. Very nice."
Posted by Unknown on "The Melding" by Malcholm Dark
- "Because an American Marine would never commit a crime. It's all glory, isn't it...? This felt rather like reading nationalist propaganda right before a war, when the government needs more recruits. I respect that it was written in honour of fallen comrades, at least. They deserve some notice, and this was indeed a very heartfelt tribute for them. The rhythm and structure was perfect and flowed very well. "
Posted by Unknown on "The United States Marines" by Malcholm Dark
- "Dear Poet, I am a Brazilian poetess and your poem brought tears on me. I dont understand nothing about war and always ask to myself how is hard for a mother, father, sons, lost yours beloved on war. You guys have some special that i think on one has. You love so much your Country at first, And are so brave. You go where no one wants to go. You left tears behind you and more tears when you return. Hope your Country loves you at same way. Brave men, you are. Beautiful poem. TFS"
Posted by M Morgan on "The United States Marines" by Malcholm Dark
- "I love the conflicting voices in this, cracked up a little. A Star Trek reference (:D) and one of the voices being a serial killer... Imaginative and a fun read. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "My Recipe For Dark Poetry" by Malcholm Dark
- "Still pondering the animosity expressed here and I would have to guess that you might be a practicing clown maybe? But then, aren't we all? Thanks M!"
Posted by dwells on "Why Clowns Hate Mimes" by Malcholm Dark
- "The Castrati did have a lock on Italian opera in the 1800's - what a sacrifice, but then if done at an early age maybe what's to miss (I'll have to ask my dog). If I may "cooties" is the correct spelling stateside, and straight men are imperiled primarily in the TV weatherman vocation for some reason, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Exercise In Rhyme Fa-la-la la-la la-la-la-la" by Malcholm Dark
- "what this guy here wrote, by the way, he was not a "dp scholar" which, apparently, does little to improve the quality of comments beyond this one here, anyway. heh... still a fun jingle to read, man, all the best."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Spanish Limes" by Malcholm Dark
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