Comments by All Members
- "Whoa that was pretty cool how that flowed together. Good way of describing sadness "
Posted by Unknown on "Falling" by jack paper
- "stunning little explosion.....this feels every bit as freefalling and burning as the last ember of a fire burning, reaching the heavens, but only to find darkness....sad....crushing, but still somewhere, the light lives on......"
Posted by Unknown on "Circles" by jack paper
- "alluring and engaging... it weaves a perfect balance of desire, proposition, enticement and withdrawl... you tease you...."
Posted by NikesRain on "Breathe" by jack paper
- "This is the only Shakespearian sonnet I've seen on this site, other than my own. This was good, they're tricky things, but this was good, you know your stuff."
Posted by Trigger on "Brightly" by jack paper
- "mm mm...little bits of wisdom to savor. sometimes its the short writes that encompass more than a page could do. *tips hat* ~K"
Posted by Sin on "New Symmetry" by jack paper
- "Wonderful! I had to read this multiple times. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like it! Great use of words."
Posted by Eric on "sleepless" by jack paper
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