Brightly

By jack paper

When has such beauty come down from on high
Or been a match for natures finest things?
This one could live aloft on painted skies
And there compare with those that God gave wings.
All other beauty fades within my sight
When I behold this vision I adore.
If I could spend a day or just one night,
I would give all I ever earned and more,
To raptly sit and gaze upon her grace.
Yes, in this task I would be quite content.
There at her feet I'd firmly claim my place.
For baser needs I never would relent,
From singing praises of this lovely one,
Who's beauty shines more brightly than the sun.













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© 2007 jack paper
Published on Tuesday, December 11, 2007.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"
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  • Mylissa On Thursday, August 28, 2008, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    always beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: beauty at its finest..I've missed your writing.

  • Mari On Monday, December 17, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    ./

  • A former member wrote: eloquent and graceful; lit from within. .

  • Trigger On Wednesday, December 12, 2007, Trigger (68)By person wrote:

    This is the only Shakespearian sonnet I've seen on this site, other than my own. This was good, they're tricky things, but this was good, you know your stuff.

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