Brightly
By jack paper
When has such beauty come down from on high
Or been a match for natures finest things?
This one could live aloft on painted skies
And there compare with those that God gave wings.
All other beauty fades within my sight
When I behold this vision I adore.
If I could spend a day or just one night,
I would give all I ever earned and more,
To raptly sit and gaze upon her grace.
Yes, in this task I would be quite content.
There at her feet I'd firmly claim my place.
For baser needs I never would relent,
From singing praises of this lovely one,
Who's beauty shines more brightly than the sun.
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© 2007 jack paper
Published on Tuesday, December 11, 2007.
Filed under: "Structured" and
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, August 28, 2008, Mylissa
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always beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
beauty at its finest..I've missed your writing.
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On Monday, December 17, 2007, Mari
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A former member wrote:
eloquent and graceful; lit from within. .
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On Wednesday, December 12, 2007, Trigger
(68) wrote:
This is the only Shakespearian sonnet I've seen on this site, other than my own. This was good, they're tricky things, but this was good, you know your stuff.