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Water born
By Sin
oceans collect in my veins
the ebb and flow of eternity tucked inside a kiss
the moon, a bitter mistress
that no longer holds sway over these tides
crumbles in an eclipse of starbursts
as russet hues drift
across breaking cresents of midnight
clouds collecting upon my lashes
as sand fingers catch foamy waves
before releasing their turbulance
back into the night
this gush of free flowing emotion
leaves me empty
and i settle back into the calm
of this hushed serenity
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© 2007 Sin
Published on Thursday, April 5, 2007.
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On Thursday, November 2, 2017, Cassette
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wrote:
wonderful, but I expected nothing less from you.
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On Thursday, November 2, 2017, Sin
(1135) wrote:
Thank you for taking the time to comment
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On Thursday, May 15, 2008, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Come back :(
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On Wednesday, July 18, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
beautiful, i really love this, better with every read
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On Sunday, June 17, 2007, Tonights Decision
(132) wrote:
in such rivers.. waitig for the tides.. this was so easy to lose oneself in... so easy..
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On Wednesday, May 16, 2007, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
vivid beauty
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On Sunday, April 15, 2007, island warrior
(210) wrote:
Wonderful as always.
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A former member wrote:
very nice...took me to a place far far away.
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A former member wrote:
really awesome
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A former member wrote:
this is splendid. a washed feeling of white overtures, with a blush of radiant serenity. beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
this poem is wonderful. love the analogy. the first four lines (for me) in particular are a dream..i would bookmark if it wasn't for the quota thingy .. bravo!
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On Monday, April 9, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
thank you thats quite a compliment :)
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On Monday, April 9, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
you wash the dirt and darkness from long-lost-images in my mind and you give them life and brush them beautiful again... this is imbued with passion
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On Sunday, April 8, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
what a trip..I feel your words with beauty that presses against your lips. remarkable.
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A former member wrote:
i have to agree with Aunty, this did sound pretty orgasmic..."this gush of free flowing emotion leaves me empty.." That explains how it feels....beautiful write.
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On Sunday, April 8, 2007, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
hushed serenity... so, so beautiful. there are always phrases that stick in my mind in your poetry, you just put things across so eloquently.. Stunning, as you are. :)
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On Friday, April 6, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Perfect! I agree with Cloud, you should be published.
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On Friday, April 6, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
emotionally epic. weaving words like webs, maybe you should publish?
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On Friday, April 6, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
"Clouds collecting upon my lashes" I really got caught up in that line. Not sure why. I loved the images it, really this whole thing, brings out. Hey, all I can do is echo the hatter, and agree with mrs depressant. Beautiful, sugar.
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On Thursday, April 5, 2007, nur hidayah
(114) wrote:
Yes, I agree. Orgasmic tempest! 'oceans collect in my veins' Mmm powerful. Thank you for sharing.
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On Thursday, April 5, 2007, blue
(1409) wrote:
rawr! cook some more. lady.
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On Thursday, April 5, 2007, blue
(1409) wrote:
damn, i just rhymed
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On Thursday, April 5, 2007, Dei
(663) wrote:
this is probably your best that ive read. Nicely done
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On Thursday, April 5, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
Ahhhh, sounds orgasmic ;)
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