Falling

By jack paper

I sat by her side for hours
Praying crying pleading singing
My sisters would come and go
A priest and others too drifted
In and out of darkness

Tears there were so many
A solitary pool gathered
At the corner of her eye
As if she shared our sorrow
I watched it run slowly
To the middle of her cheek
Oasis in a parched land
I stood to get a tissue
Could taste my own tears
I reached down to touch her
I Lost my balance
Put out my hands to stop
She’ll be crushed!
But I never touched
My hands they went through
No substance, she wasn’t there
In that instance I felt myself
Falling through time and space
Forever, endless, nothing
I woke up where she had been
In the bed, in her space
I had taken her place.

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© 2006 tgatmatt
Published on Wednesday, December 13, 2006.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Whoa that was pretty cool how that flowed together. Good way of describing sadness

  • Sin On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this was crushing..such sorrow spilled softly..like raindrops sliding down a window ~kristy

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, December 28, 2006, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    This was excellent and I particularly liked the way the poem turned after the 2nd half of the 2nd stanza. Write the hell on..

  • Drea On Wednesday, December 20, 2006, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    Such sorrow. Welcome to DP.

  • Mylissa On Monday, December 18, 2006, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    wow so sad, so beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: this was very good. welcome to dp. ~ red.

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