My Love (an ode to the sea)
By jack paper
Once outside on moonless night
I gazed into the sky
Taking in the stars above
Wishing I could fly
T'was then I felt a stirring come
Into my tired mind
Gone away again it went
Somewhere I could not find
Then as morning broke upon
The shadows of my cell
Louder now I heard the call
At once I knew it well!
I'd heard the ocean calling
With soft undaunting sigh
Carried on a salted breeze
That filled the azure sky
Now I knew and understood
The message softly sent
With great haste I journeyed on
And to the sea I went.
Here at last I'll stay for good
There's nowhere else for me
I've come home from far away
And with my love I'll be
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© 2007 chthonian
Published on Monday, January 29, 2007.
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On Sunday, December 23, 2007, italianbella
(183) wrote:
what a beautiful image this creates so peaceful and tender i loved it
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A former member wrote:
Such a dreamy piece! It is a beautiful thing when someone knows how to use rhyme :) the melodious flow of this just carries me away...
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On Friday, February 2, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
reminds me of good old tom waits songs (which speaks volumes because he is one of my idols)
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful write.. The ending line was pure beauty.
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On Monday, January 29, 2007, soul dancer
(95) wrote:
This has the sound of an Irish song to me. So very lovely.
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On Monday, January 29, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
Midnight dream...this felt and read beautiful.