My Love (an ode to the sea)

By jack paper

Once outside on moonless night
I gazed into the sky
Taking in the stars above
Wishing I could fly

T'was then I felt a stirring come
Into my tired mind
Gone away again it went
Somewhere I could not find

Then as morning broke upon
The shadows of my cell
Louder now I heard the call
At once I knew it well!

I'd heard the ocean calling
With soft undaunting sigh
Carried on a salted breeze
That filled the azure sky

Now I knew and understood
The message softly sent
With great haste I journeyed on
And to the sea I went.

Here at last I'll stay for good
There's nowhere else for me
I've come home from far away
And with my love I'll be

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© 2007 chthonian
Published on Monday, January 29, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • italianbella On Sunday, December 23, 2007, italianbella (183)By person wrote:

    what a beautiful image this creates so peaceful and tender i loved it

  • A former member wrote: Such a dreamy piece! It is a beautiful thing when someone knows how to use rhyme :) the melodious flow of this just carries me away...

  • Bella Butchery On Friday, February 2, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    reminds me of good old tom waits songs (which speaks volumes because he is one of my idols)

  • A former member wrote: Wonderful write.. The ending line was pure beauty.

  • soul dancer On Monday, January 29, 2007, soul dancer (95)By person wrote:

    This has the sound of an Irish song to me. So very lovely.

  • Mylissa On Monday, January 29, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    Midnight dream...this felt and read beautiful.

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