New Symmetry

By jack paper

Whether crawling caterpillar
Or beautiful butterfly
The spider longs
To dress them both
In silk.

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© 2007 jack paper
Published on Wednesday, August 15, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mari On Thursday, November 22, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    hm. So the prey doesn't matter? Well I guess it's all food in the end.

  • Sin On Tuesday, September 18, 2007, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    mm mm...little bits of wisdom to savor. sometimes its the short writes that encompass more than a page could do. *tips hat* ~K

  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Love it. This is a shorty to savour. Great work.

  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Oh, and perfect symmetry of form there. Cool bananas! -Carl

  • Mylissa On Sunday, August 19, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    taunts him with silk...:oP

  • A former member wrote: mmm...an evocative little piece ;)

  • A former member wrote: dark.....

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    mesmerized...silk is lovely! ;}

  • Reefer_rave On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, Reefer_rave (139)By person wrote:

    o0o....short and sweet

  • A former member wrote: I like it ^ ^

  • elisa On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    intriguing thought.... nicely done.

  • What Limes On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, What Limes (54)By person wrote:

    interesting enough! nice.

  • NikesRain On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    very true... spiders see only the goal of self preservation.... nice one

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