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Terminal
By jack paper
I pursued you
Persuaded
Seduced
Stripped
Invaded
I've been in you
Mind
Heart
Mouth
Cunt
My conquest
I owned you
While I
Ravaged
Defiled
Plundered
Damaged
You oozed into me
Infected
Injected
Desecrated
Sublimated
My pores
My brain
My core
Every cell
Now who owns whom?
I don't want to play anymore.
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© 2006 tgatmatt
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On Tuesday, May 12, 2009, Mylissa
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wrote:
Still amazing...the best ending ever!
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A former member wrote:
wow...this was....wow...
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On Tuesday, October 30, 2007, Niemand
(355) wrote:
This is so powerful...-Airi
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On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
Had to come back to this one more time!
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On Thursday, July 12, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
uggghhh... I'm stalking this one.
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On Thursday, February 1, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
oO what happens when the hunter becomes the hunted? is the game not the same when the tables are turned?...i couldnt help but snicker at the ending because i think ive lived this..very spicy write ~kristy
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On Thursday, December 28, 2006, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Who's intoxicated who the most? Great rush of a write. I'm looking forward to more from you. Welcome to DP!
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A former member wrote:
Nice job!
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On Friday, December 22, 2006, verablue
(106) wrote:
great flow...i love the strength in the simplicity of this.
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A former member wrote:
Very powerful write. Nice job.
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On Friday, December 22, 2006, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
Wow...this was intense...full of desire, darkness...I am speechless.
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