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Breathe
By jack paper
You breathe
Making contrails
On the thin glass
That separates our lives
I know you're out there
I can feel you
Looking in
What is it you expect?
Do you want to see me
Exposed and laid bare?
You're afraid
You won't make a sound
You just stare
Paralyzed
I know you want
Come and take
Are you ready?
Do you dare?
I ache for you
Hair trigger tension
Ripping my soul
I'll lure you in
Subdue you
Devour you
I...
I am...
I have..
I must have...
No!
Stop!
Regain control!
For now
And for now
You watch
And....
I wait
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© 2006 tgatmatt
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A former member wrote:
very very deep.
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On Saturday, March 8, 2008, NikesRain
(1298)
wrote:
alluring and engaging... it weaves a perfect balance of desire, proposition, enticement and withdrawl... you tease you....
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On Saturday, March 8, 2008, Niemand
(361) wrote:
*breathes*
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A former member wrote:
breathless hunger lurks behind your words.mmm hmmm ;)
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On Tuesday, July 17, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
watching, still. beautiful!
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A former member wrote:
I could just really feel the tension dripping off of every word,good job...
***Ashley
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On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, Sin
(1168) wrote:
oh the tension and anticipation rolled off this in waves...i could see the predatory stares, the slow slide of a tongue when you can almost taste it...mm this was hot ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
damn!! damn !! ~ red.
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On Wednesday, December 27, 2006, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
simply beautiful...sexual.
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On Saturday, December 23, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
intense ....and haunting........makes me sigh.
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On Saturday, December 23, 2006, verablue
(111) wrote:
"I ache for you Hair trigger tension Ripping my soul" (!!!) awesomeness!
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