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silent crashing
By NikesRain
i stood and watched the sea
rolling waves
running to the beach
azure crystal passion
under the moon
running to its lover
with graceful abandon
nothing but the rushing
joining of souls
resplendent and complete
combined and ethereal
and i wanted so much
to be that shore
be as lovely
as those grains of sand
shining with starlight
and you and your intensity
to be the tide
caressing and embracing
beautiful in the moonlight
yet i am nothing
but a soul upon a rock
shrouded against the wind
crying small pieces of me
into an unforgiving sea
and you are
farther from here
than the moon
from the tides
and you can not see
this crashing
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© 2007 NikesRain
Published on Monday, March 26, 2007.
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A former member wrote:
This is very well penned and beautiful.. The loneliness in your words is vivid and overwhelming.. It makes me somehow sad.. When we are drowning in the sea and nobody is there to give us a hand.. Great writing! :)
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On Friday, June 17, 2011, ArcticWolf999
(55)
wrote:
It makes you take a deep breath and think a little more.
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On Saturday, August 11, 2007, Winterwords
(6) wrote:
How often have I been sitting there, listening for footsteps in dream-lit hours, hoping someone would come wrap her wings around me - you just did...
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On Sunday, July 22, 2007, jack paper
(126) wrote:
lonely with a splash of discontent but very beautifly written
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A former member wrote:
amazing. ~ saddened.
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On Saturday, April 7, 2007, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
lovely writing
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On Friday, April 6, 2007, Tonights Decision
(137) wrote:
this left me in another place or time.. when moments becomes ponds... and all that exsist is the crashing of the waves.. timeless poetry..
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On Friday, April 6, 2007, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
:) Loved it..just the sort of poem I would to love to write and love to read...Thank You - Carl
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On Monday, April 2, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
you kill me every time.
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A former member wrote:
'crying small pieces of me into an unforgiving sea' -amazing.
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On Tuesday, March 27, 2007, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
thank you both
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On Monday, March 26, 2007, Rebel_not_Radical
(78) wrote:
~sometimes there are just things that limit you because it is what you have at your disposal (in your case being a soul in the rock) but maybe because it's fate or something like that...who knows maybe you'll find your soulmate because of that...
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On Monday, March 26, 2007, Rebel_not_Radical
(78) wrote:
excellent write and a very touching story...i really felt this one...very cool
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