PSAMATHE
By jack paper
Mesmerized
By her cool liquid dance.
Hypnotized by fluid grace,
Drawn into the vastness,
I am shrouded in her mists.
To the brooding sky I
Whisper aloft her name.
Carried fast on rising winds
Full sails sing her reply.
Storms built from her passion
Rage into a tempest.
Drawn in by this danger
She binds me in the blackness.
Lights!
~~~~~Arcing electric~~~~~
~~~~~Heart pulsing violent~~~~~
~~~~~Lighting up the night~~~~~
~~~~~Illumine my soul~~~~~
Every new surge cresting,
Higher, she tosses me
On turbulent waters.
Overcome by these currents
I slip beneath her tide.
Dawn breaks in quiet contrast.
Mirroring waters sleep
Lapping at my shores like
The rhythm of her breathing.
Softly her gentle sighs
Perfumed with morning dew
Accent the salted air
Warmly caressing my cheek.
Stretching she stirs...
Enchanted by the swell
Flowing up against me
Sinuously moving
Her soft undulating waves
Seduce.....
and
ever
so
slowly
she
erodes
me.
Comments on "PSAMATHE"
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On Wednesday, September 19, 2007, steuss
(92) wrote:
I like the marriage of sky and water and lightning images that reoccur
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On Thursday, July 19, 2007, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
this was enchanting, intense with such decadent softness tinting all of it...luciousness
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On Tuesday, July 17, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
Wow...she pulled me in also. Had to delve further in to this enchanting goddess. If this be the reflection of a woman incarnate I hope you both fare better.
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On Monday, July 16, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
now this was mesmerizing! and those last few words.. wow.
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On Sunday, July 15, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
To me this described that moment when you glimpse a girl who sends you into wild rapture. Absolutely wonderful poem with a fantastic flow. -Carl
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On Sunday, July 15, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
I had to come back to such beauty...gorgeous.
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On Sunday, July 15, 2007, elisa
(1595) wrote:
beauty of the heightened sense......an unspoken language of intensity.... spellbinding.
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A former member wrote:
egads! that ending is shiveringly seductive.. ..and that ~~~~~charged midsection. . .. what a visual effect/treat! original and orgas....yeah, you get the idea. ..
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On Sunday, July 15, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Yay! saintedrudeness..egads!
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On Saturday, July 14, 2007, sIo
(898) wrote:
it's times like these that i am so glad i'm a pervert. i don't know if this was meant to be lovingly sexual but it's divine.
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On Saturday, July 14, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
Take me away please...this is just breath-taking, a surge of beauty with each and every line. Romance with nature is so enduring. Love it. Fav.
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A former member wrote:
oh my...sweetness drips like ink from the well of your mind. This is beautiful...sensuality at its finest!