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Breathe II
By jack paper
she moves imperceptibly
a whisper in the wind
senses tingle
with each silent step
moving ever closer
danger burns...
weaves like the flames
erupting from this fire
spitting tension on
flickering shadows
edging ever nearer
fueled by her musk
anticipation binds
sharpened apprehension
ties my soul in knots
my obsession
so near..
sinews taught
teeth clenched
fingers twitch
heartbeat harder
i will possess!
wait...
listen!
i
can
almost
hear
her....breathe
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© 2007 jack paper
Published on Friday, July 20, 2007.
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On Tuesday, May 12, 2009, Mylissa
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wrote:
It is time to obsess again...come back and post! You always inspire.
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On Sunday, July 22, 2007, mysterylove
(97) wrote:
sexy write, really =)
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On Saturday, July 21, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
hmm great follow up. very predatorial.. this was done brilliantly.
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A former member wrote:
excellent write. you have captured the essence of an unobtainable desire perfectly.
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On Friday, July 20, 2007, elisa
(1595) wrote:
raw contemplation...fierce and focused. ..i love it.
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On Friday, July 20, 2007, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
this was like an inhale of the steam that rises off hot sake... dusky sweet with a lingering catch that just teases the senses with want.... breath catching for sure...
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A former member wrote:
shadowplay; a wavering breathy image to cling to in this ......needful piece.
ness.
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On Friday, July 20, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
The ending is polished with perfection. So beautiful each word, feeling, emotion. Twisting and turning inside me. Outstanding.
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On Friday, July 20, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
My favorite part is 'I will possess' sexually charged. Lovely.
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