Past Time ( Once called Untitled)

By Aurora_Light

This poem is so named at the advise of those who've read it.


I met a guy the other day,
At a dance to more precisely say.
He seemed so handsome and so nice.
He treated me like a person,
Someone equal to him.
Not the underclassman that I am.
And then to my delight,
He asked me to dance at the end of the night.
If it was out of pity I do not know,
Nor do I wish to know.
As we danced around the room,
We talked of things like life and school.
Then at the end I kissed his check,
He was quiet, he didn't say a word.
And then he was gone,
Without a glance back my way.
Now I wonder how I could have been such a fool,
To think I could ever be more than a way to pass by the time.

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Copyright 2003 Amanda L. Mrozinski
Published on Saturday, April 19, 2003.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Blinded_Tiger On Sunday, August 10, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    Wow ... Sweet. And what a jerk. Damn thats all i can think of right now. What a lame jerk. Dont stop showing your emotions becouse of jerks like that. Your beautiful.

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, August 8, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    this reminds me of cominghome w/ well...u know.

  • The_Scavenger On Wednesday, May 14, 2003, The_Scavenger (30)By person wrote:

    I like the poem but men are not the only ones who do that. Not all men are a like either. I for one would never have led you or anyone else on. It is a great poem and i would have to agree with past time for a title.

  • Aurora_Light On Saturday, April 19, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    comments welcome at any time (guys can be a** at times no offence to any reading this)

  • Aurora_Light On Saturday, April 19, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    people i mean

  • Rebel_Angel On Sunday, April 20, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I agree w/ u Aurora... this poem reminds me of our cominghome (u member how that went...lol)...

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