Zion

By urbanhumility

i learn to emulate,
i lose every truth....and stumble.


Be born unto me; ...all the Dark Truths....the ones that harded one to stone..,
and kill love....

Wanting to be wrong; and vorpal sharp: In the same instance my genesis of Zion.


Baptized within to Divine passions; huddled in a truly bi-polar mortal...

i learn to emulate a " martyred" and "owned" travisty...

the writing is on the wall....

my eyes of brillance scribe a doctrine of truth...






i see now.

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© 2006 urbanhumility
Published on Saturday, January 28, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ANGELSLAYER On Monday, March 15, 2010, ANGELSLAYER (118)By person wrote:

    ah, Zion. The "promised land." The fabled lie. Seems as if you've seen through it

  • surething On Sunday, June 21, 2009, surething (51)By person wrote:

    wow, you make such a powerful use with the words you choose. your lines are filled with alluring susbstance, I will definitely be reading this over again.

  • A former member wrote: you possess a Voltaire.ish thing. . the prodigal blind son mindbending his way back. ..im beginning to become addicted to your writes

  • Dark Moon On Thursday, April 12, 2007, Dark Moon (7)By person wrote:

    Very deep hun...I pondered over this for a while.

  • Tonights Decision On Sunday, December 17, 2006, Tonights Decision (137)By person wrote:

    evoking... something to ponder for some time

  • Mari On Friday, June 2, 2006, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    when the jews return to zion

  • NikesRain On Friday, March 3, 2006, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    i'm sorry i missed this before. thoroughly engrossing and flowing so surely, a spinshift through truths that touch deep and invoke a wish to be so aptly able to 'see' oneself... amazing

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Sunday, February 26, 2006, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    this was transcending, cryptic and powerful...-l-

  • Drayvinio On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, Drayvinio (19)By person wrote:

    Wow. It was beautiful and deep. Very well done!

  • Crimson Shade On Sunday, February 12, 2006, Crimson Shade (92)By person wrote:

    "the writing is on the wall.... my eyes of brillance scribe a doctrine of truth... i see now." - Fantastic - thought provoking and resolute - nice to see something atypical posted.

  • A former member wrote: Resolute and potent, self-actualising, a deep, refreshing originality.

  • A former member wrote: Thought provoking. I'm not sure what you intended to portray here but I know that what I took from this will keep me content to hide. Smoothly done. ~Ship!

  • A former member wrote: this flowed in grace and tranquility..i almost missed this, but i'm glad i didn't.

  • TaintedButterfly On Monday, January 30, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    You always stun me with your words. And I have none to do you justice!

  • sIo On Saturday, January 28, 2006, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    grace this is...

  • A former member wrote: Interesting write here. Flowed well. I enjoyed it

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