Comments by Crimson Shade
- ""From her cuts I have learned
Truth is the flame, not the burn" - read it again and this stuck out for me. Its how people use truth that is harmful, not truth itself.
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Posted by Crimson Shade on "Finger Lick'in Truth" by bpathos
- ""Word museum sentences ripe with meaning" - nice piece, first piece i've enjoyed in a long while."
Posted by Crimson Shade on "Poet Drown" by bpathos
- ""the writing is on the wall....
my eyes of brillance scribe a doctrine of truth... i see now." - Fantastic - thought provoking and resolute - nice to see something atypical posted.
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Posted by Crimson Shade on "Zion" by urbanhumility
- "I "Would help such a broken thing" - nobody is broken - we are different. Amazing write full of emotion and heart... so innocent in its reflection... great write."
Posted by Crimson Shade on "Another Broken Thing" by TornPaperDoll
- "Amazing attitude, i feel like running down the street and jumping on the first police car i find a lighting uo the biggest spliff i can with the coffin dodgers looking on... great write."
Posted by Crimson Shade on "I'll Decide This Time" by Hello Dead Kitty
- ""But words don't fit in an evidence bag. Gavel hits the wood, God doesn't exist." - i hope you dont live in the uk - here a high ranking juge said "Most women out are asking to be raped" "
Posted by Crimson Shade on "God's just a name." by smearedXmakeup
- "Amazing write - i like this for the fact that even though it is weighty in the vocabulary department, it doesn't take anything away from the rhythm. This rolls effortlessly off the tongue and the content is coherent and linear -"
Posted by Crimson Shade on "membership submission - The Pit of Her" by BlackBear
- ""Lovely lies eyes locked on my thighs" - i loved the opening lines - made me think of how obsessed men can actually be - good write. "
Posted by Crimson Shade on "Love?" by insideout
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