Is It Over?

By BeautyInShadow

All the times we shared
All the times we missed
Its too late now
All the stupid fights
All the wasted time
Its Too late now

I worried you didnt care
And that you'd never change
I hated your stuborn nature
I just wanted you to see my pain
You used to make me happy
You used to really want to
But then I wasn't happy
And you stopped trying so hard

Your ears went deaf
Your mouth went mute
Your touch lost feeling
Your heart went cold

Looking back now
I would rather be unhappy with you
Then not have you in my life

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© 2007 BeautyInShadow
Published on Saturday, October 6, 2007.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Review"
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  • Crimson Shade On Thursday, November 1, 2007, Crimson Shade (92)By person wrote:

    I've *been* this poem. Great write.

  • Sketso On Wednesday, October 24, 2007, Sketso (416)By person wrote:

    Would you really rather be unhappy with one, rather than risk finding happiness elsewhere? I hurt from this...

  • A former member wrote: ouch. this was powerful ~Silver~

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