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The Sun's Passionate Dismissal
By SickSanityJenn
A gaze nearly dark as night
Eyes blaze, hot as the Sun
I'm burning but it feels right
Quickly my mind goes numb
Just a glance and it's gone
Distant flames and a cold moon
A second isn't very long
But just enough to swoon
Obligated to touch the Sun
I climbed atop the sky
But the heavens came undone
And I fell back into the night
I tried to find my voice
Silence was all I found
I'm tortured from within
Without making a sound
Crying out from the void
In the wake of all I've done
Everything I've destroyed
Just to touch the Sun
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Copyright 2014 SickSanityJenn
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On Friday, February 14, 2014, Crimson Shade
(92)
wrote:
I like the link you form between love and the sun/heat here. Although it could have been passion that you acutely felt, hinted at in the last stanza. Best I have read from you thus far - Crim
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On Friday, February 14, 2014, SickSanityJenn
(250) wrote:
Thank you very much
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On Wednesday, February 12, 2014, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...it's a well spun tale. climbing the sky disturbs & angers the guardians of heaven. quite an adventure...
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On Thursday, February 13, 2014, SickSanityJenn
(250) wrote:
What beastly desires could compel one To suffer the inferno of the Sun?
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On Wednesday, February 12, 2014, blue angel
(866) wrote:
I can feel the fervent solar heat from this.. Nice inking :) Welcome to dp :)~
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On Wednesday, February 12, 2014, SickSanityJenn
(250) wrote:
Thank you very much! :) I appreciate you reading and commenting
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