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Love?
By insideout
Lovely lies
eyes locked on my thighs
as I turn to walk away..
the tables turn
you should have learned
That I couldn't possibly stay..
the moment you spoke
something inside awoke
my life has forever changed
so thank you love
truly a gift from above
that you were born so absolutely deranged
on with my life
I'll never think twice
again of such an unlikely thing.
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© 2006 insideout
Published on Saturday, February 11, 2006.
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On Wednesday, November 15, 2017, Just Dave
(448)
wrote:
Dudes are dicks.
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A former member wrote:
it's easy, is it not, to fall in love with love... at what point do expectations undermine the possibility... a most unlikely occurrence... but then better to have loved and... well, you know the story
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On Thursday, June 14, 2012, The Dybbuk
(895) wrote:
what this guy said.... it can take a lifetime to let one love again, maybe. thanks.
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A former member wrote:
words that arouse the soul... where love lies... unlikely love is
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A former member wrote:
It makes me ashamed that there are so many men out there like that, giving men like me a bad name. Excellent piece!
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A former member wrote:
You have just written my heart. Detachment sucks. You are grand.
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On Saturday, February 11, 2006, Crimson Shade
(92) wrote:
"Lovely lies eyes locked on my thighs" - i loved the opening lines - made me think of how obsessed men can actually be - good write.
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