why i don't date when i haven't gotten laid

By KittyStryker


when it's been a while
i think i come off a little strong.

i speak more intensely
my eye contact is piercing and bores through
and every word reeks of musk and want.

i am a creature of desire and desiring-
i know what i want, and how to get it
and i will.
come close, and you will find
my lips taste of cloves and other men
i've devoured... i tend to do that.

i don't mean to- i just get a bit
excited when i'm almost touching
someone i want to wrestle into bed
and take for mine.

every inch of skin feels like i'm on ecstasy
i expand and swallow small intimacies
as if they were sample packets.

dating is impossible when i feel like this
i cannot sit still long enough to listen
and i don't pay attention to the things that matter-
just read the signs to guess what kind of lover
you'll end up being.

dinner feels like just a formality
to getting home and fucking
so i can decide if i really like you.

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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Thursday, December 30, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Sunday, February 18, 2018, Just Dave (457)By person wrote:

    Love it. Sexy and dangerous. Great write. JD

  • Delphoid-Q On Saturday, January 1, 2005, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    That's why you should date me... I'm not afraid of a woman with a healthy sexual appetite.

  • BeautifulCalamity On Saturday, January 1, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    "my lips taste of cloves and other men i've devoured... i tend to do that". . wonderful line. . awesomely written, lustful and truly sexy .. the honesty makes it even better. . nice piece

  • A former member wrote: this was an awesome write.

  • K_Love On Friday, December 31, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    hehe great write. Hot romance, very intense write. Awesome job, really felt the emotion.

  • spaniellie On Friday, December 31, 2004, spaniellie (76)By person wrote:

    great write, sexy and honest.

  • A former member wrote: Rawr, a yummy delightful poem of lust and wanting.

  • A former member wrote: "dinner feels like just a formality to getting home and fucking so i can decide if i really like you. " and THAT is why i don't date. period.

  • KittyStryker On Thursday, December 30, 2004, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    hehe, well, we all have different priorities. i find a happy sexual life is as important as liking similar music, or having hobbies in common. platonic relationships don't work for me.

  • A former member wrote: oh i agree, a happy sexual life is important. but yes my priorities are very different. not that i condemn yours at all, Bast, go for it ;)

  • KittyStryker On Thursday, December 30, 2004, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    regardless- this is more aout why i don't date when i'm horny, not about my general relationship wants and needs... tho sex IS high up there.

  • A former member wrote: fair enough, i got the idea of the write. was just making a sarcastic comment because i'm a sarcastic bastard. have a nice day :)

  • VenomPlease On Thursday, December 30, 2004, VenomPlease (134)By person wrote:

    Ha this is great. I just love the vibe of the whole thing.


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