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Cemetery Song
By Circe Avalon
In the whispers of the wind
A sweet night calls to me
And from the darkness lies within
A precious melody
Softly does the breeze sing its ever sorrowful tune
And many a gentle stranger holds out his hand to you
But as I lie in wonder
As I yet lie in wait
Never do I negate
The feeling that I am irate
From where this melody
And why this promising
Whatever has lain before
Has been dormant and not developing
Had I never wondered
Had I crossed the line
Now I sit and wait for the passing of time
As I watch the others die
As I cry steady rivers
Never will I know a time
That I had not felt deaths shivers
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Copyright 2004 circeavalon
Comments on "Cemetery Song"
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On Sunday, June 10, 2007, Moonflower
(301)
wrote:
very nice flow. beautiful poem.
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A former member wrote:
it's amazing...i felt shivers down my spine. nice write. =)
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
I just love your writing style. Great work!
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A former member wrote:
Well done. Your best work, I think. the first stanza is very good. +T.P.U+
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A former member wrote:
This seems a cross between cellos & chainsaws for me.
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
Beautifully haunting, nice write
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
the beginning two stanzas are so hauntingly beautiful and what you are expressing here is powerful. however IMMHO the flow kinds of breaks at stanza three and doesnt pick up again until the last stanza. Very nicely done overall though.
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Delicate and haunting.. very well done. -Michael
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
very haunting and beautiful at the same time. I liked it a lot.
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Circe Avalon
(115) wrote:
I liked it, but then again, I'm sort of bias
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