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see you
By maddin foxxxy
Colored skies
Carpet stains
You were here
I feel you
Again
Just yesterday we were
Laughing at the corner
Of that place
With flowers and cameras
Flashing each of our face
I remember just everything . .
I’d forget if I had the mind to do so
Just because it breaks me again and again ..
I go with the flow
Never knew you’d be gone so soon
November turned in december
taking you
to whisper a word of goodbye
is not for me
so i said take care
hope things go your way
your face like “too badâ€
it’s hellish sad . .. .
i dont whisper goodbyes
so i hope you do take care
and i pray the sun’s shining your day
i’ll be seeing you soon
just for the better
thousand years later
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Copyright 2004 maddin foxxxy
Published on Saturday, August 28, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Amazing writing! I love how you put these words together
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On Tuesday, December 29, 2009, Dilated View
(583)
wrote:
This felt... indifferent? And yet with the assurance that in your future run in there would have been growth. Like others have said, very delicate. I enjoyed it.
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On Tuesday, December 29, 2009, Lydia Jade
(1350) wrote:
what he said
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
"to whisper a word of goodbye /is not for me "...i really felt those words...your way of expressing is so tender, it feels comforting to read from you...-l-
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On Saturday, August 28, 2004, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
your words are so delicate...but the underlying emeotion, what feels to be like anger and even a sense of abandonment, is too powerful to ignore..
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On Saturday, August 28, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
ahhhh that deep painful goodbye without being a complete goodbye is so beautifully expressed here--and I know it well--excellent job
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On Saturday, August 28, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
i really felt this one,delicate and beautifully expressed
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A former member wrote:
Quite a read...whispers of nostalgia...a lovely write...thank you.
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