see you

By maddin foxxxy

Colored skies
Carpet stains
You were here
I feel you
Again

Just yesterday we were
Laughing at the corner
Of that place
With flowers and cameras
Flashing each of our face

I remember just everything . .
Iâ€™d forget if I had the mind to do so
Just because it breaks me again and again ..
I go with the flow

Never knew youâ€™d be gone so soon
November turned in december
taking you

to whisper a word of goodbye
is not for me
so i said take care
hope things go your way

your face like â€œtoo badâ€
itâ€™s hellish sad . .. .
i dont whisper goodbyes
so i hope you do take care
and i pray the sunâ€™s shining your day

iâ€™ll be seeing you soon
just for the better

thousand years later

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Published on Saturday, August 28, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "see you"

A former member wrote: Amazing writing! I love how you put these words together
On Tuesday, December 29, 2009, Dilated View (582) wrote:

This felt... indifferent? And yet with the assurance that in your future run in there would have been growth. Like others have said, very delicate. I enjoyed it.
On Tuesday, December 29, 2009, Lydia Jade (1332) wrote:

what he said
On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340) wrote:

"to whisper a word of goodbye /is not for me "...i really felt those words...your way of expressing is so tender, it feels comforting to read from you...-l-
On Saturday, August 28, 2004, girlafraid (479) wrote:

your words are so delicate...but the underlying emeotion, what feels to be like anger and even a sense of abandonment, is too powerful to ignore..
On Saturday, August 28, 2004, Northstar (374) wrote:

ahhhh that deep painful goodbye without being a complete goodbye is so beautifully expressed here--and I know it well--excellent job
On Saturday, August 28, 2004, Anth (1126) wrote:

i really felt this one,delicate and beautifully expressed
A former member wrote: Quite a read...whispers of nostalgia...a lovely write...thank you.