watching

By urbanhumility

Watching......................This nights sky;

Asking Benevolent "Time" to grant me peace,
To grant me patience and humility.........

Our trivial hopes, dreams, desires, and asperations......

Within this Wonderment....
Within this quandry;
This nights sky, and all of thiese stars..............

i wish to present my gratitude.......
for what has been "given"...........;

Gratitude for this ancient glance,
into
this
nights
sky...........

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Copyright 2004 urbanhumility
Published on Thursday, August 12, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mylissa On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    fluttering the heart-strings...lovely.

  • A former member wrote: the sky is so full of wonders...I'm sorry I missed this before, this is a wonderful piece, and speaks volumes to my soul...I feel something like this, each time I glance at the night sky. Excellent. ~*Beth*~

  • TaintedButterfly On Tuesday, February 14, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    *makes a wish* What a blessing you are m'dear....

  • AniDayz On Monday, February 28, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    this is so beautiful...i absolutely love everything about this wonderful piece...*brilliance*. thank you.

  • sIo On Friday, December 31, 2004, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    you seem to have such an outlook on life that many do not have, i respect your poetry so much that i may now have to add you to favorites.

  • blue On Friday, December 10, 2004, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    your selfless view is truly admirable. a beautiful reminder of 'the little things in life'. wonderful words my friend! ~b

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful. This is purity, sincerety, virginal tenderness of flowering desires. I am left with no choice but to fave this work. You are amazing. ~ Rose.

  • Mr King On Saturday, October 16, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    this is a beautiful piece and your humility is beautiful... i wish more Americans would see and be this beautiful... 1, Seth

  • maddin foxxxy On Sunday, September 12, 2004, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    "i wish to present my gratitude....... for what has been "given"...........; " ..you have this way of making me reflect and wonder upon your words . .thank you

  • A former member wrote: You're pure, without a doubt. This ventured toward me like thoughts that were my own - like a translation of a common knowing. A marvel. And, being in Nevada, you get to see UFOs all the time in that night's sky, I'm sure...*so jealous* - END-

  • Zhee On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    truly a beautiful piece of work...

  • NikesRain On Saturday, August 28, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    ...I'm sorry I missed this before now. It's truely beautiful and lovely so simply put but with such feeling. Great work.

  • Stranger On Thursday, August 26, 2004, Stranger (264)By person wrote:

    Grace and wisdom; almost a psalm. Perhaps we should call you SageHumility.

  • sixsixnine On Thursday, August 12, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    BEAUTIFUL* I LOVE THIS! * AGAIN YOU POETRY SO DEEP WITH SUCH SIMPLE WORDS... YOUR WORDS HIT MY HEART LIKE FIRE.... YOU'RE ONE OF THE GREATIST POETS OF I'VE EVER HAD THE PRIVELLAGE TO READ *THANX* *669*

  • elisa On Thursday, August 12, 2004, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    I love the falling star effect! enjoy the meteor showers:)

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