watching

By urbanhumility

Watching......................This nights sky;

Asking Benevolent "Time" to grant me peace,
To grant me patience and humility.........

Our trivial hopes, dreams, desires, and asperations......

Within this Wonderment....
Within this quandry;
This nights sky, and all of thiese stars..............

i wish to present my gratitude.......
for what has been "given"...........;

Gratitude for this ancient glance,
into
this
nights
sky...........

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Published on Thursday, August 12, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "watching"

On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

fluttering the heart-strings...lovely.
A former member wrote: the sky is so full of wonders...I'm sorry I missed this before, this is a wonderful piece, and speaks volumes to my soul...I feel something like this, each time I glance at the night sky. Excellent. ~*Beth*~
On Tuesday, February 14, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653) wrote:

*makes a wish* What a blessing you are m'dear....
On Monday, February 28, 2005, AniDayz (812) wrote:

this is so beautiful...i absolutely love everything about this wonderful piece...*brilliance*. thank you.
On Friday, December 31, 2004, sIo (898) wrote:

you seem to have such an outlook on life that many do not have, i respect your poetry so much that i may now have to add you to favorites.
On Friday, December 10, 2004, blue (1409) wrote:

your selfless view is truly admirable. a beautiful reminder of 'the little things in life'. wonderful words my friend! ~b
A former member wrote: Beautiful. This is purity, sincerety, virginal tenderness of flowering desires. I am left with no choice but to fave this work. You are amazing. ~ Rose.
On Saturday, October 16, 2004, Mr King (547) wrote:

this is a beautiful piece and your humility is beautiful... i wish more Americans would see and be this beautiful... 1, Seth
On Sunday, September 12, 2004, maddin foxxxy (358) wrote:

"i wish to present my gratitude....... for what has been "given"...........; " ..you have this way of making me reflect and wonder upon your words . .thank you
A former member wrote: You're pure, without a doubt. This ventured toward me like thoughts that were my own - like a translation of a common knowing. A marvel. And, being in Nevada, you get to see UFOs all the time in that night's sky, I'm sure...*so jealous* - END-
On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, Zhee (529) wrote:

truly a beautiful piece of work...
On Saturday, August 28, 2004, NikesRain (1240) wrote:

...I'm sorry I missed this before now. It's truely beautiful and lovely so simply put but with such feeling. Great work.
On Thursday, August 26, 2004, Stranger (263) wrote:

Grace and wisdom; almost a psalm. Perhaps we should call you SageHumility.
On Thursday, August 12, 2004, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

BEAUTIFUL* I LOVE THIS! * AGAIN YOU POETRY SO DEEP WITH SUCH SIMPLE WORDS... YOUR WORDS HIT MY HEART LIKE FIRE.... YOU'RE ONE OF THE GREATIST POETS OF I'VE EVER HAD THE PRIVELLAGE TO READ *THANX* *669*
On Thursday, August 12, 2004, elisa (1595) wrote:

I love the falling star effect! enjoy the meteor showers:)