I Am the Unashamed Confession

By cre

I will cry,
When yesterday fails to flee the torment
These minds have wrought.
When the moments that we bought,
Cease to fulfill their impermanent obligations.
Though I will never have tears
As a simpering lullaby;
And I won't wish on burning,
As it ages itself away.

How cold your eyes,
When they withered into mine.
The warmth bled away as smoke into the sea,
When by chance your wandering glance,
Hit upon the unveiled me.

I am only the stark remainder;
The tendrils which apparently assumed
A personal expression.
I am the unashamed confession,
Left behind when the brazen wind's possession
Takes the precedent away.

I will cry,
When yesterday fails, and today is consumed by fury.
As disillusion reaches its eventual conclusion,
You fight against existence without the safety of confusion.
But you control nothing which was scattered,
And left to seed.
Yesterday is waiting -

For your sake, embrace what you fear in me.

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Copyright 2004 cre
Published on Wednesday, April 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Scarrzz On Wednesday, January 11, 2012, Scarrzz (238)By person wrote:

    The emptiness is stark when I look into your mirror of myself. Very well written. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Agreed, you are what i aspire too... Scholar

  • Lord Kalgalath On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    superb.

  • Delphoid-Q On Thursday, June 24, 2004, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    You know, you're like my backup plan. I always look through works rather randomly, and if I find nothing inspirational I just click round to your profile where I know some wonder or other will be waiting for me. It's quite reassuring, really ;)

  • sixsixnine On Thursday, May 13, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    i remember you from last year & sure enough you are still one of my favriots*669*

  • Mute Serenade On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, Mute Serenade (445)By person wrote:

    I wish I had fallen into your world earlier.... i can't think of a good comment... i'm just staring at my screen in awe working on the words. it may take awhile... but awesome write.-Sue

  • urbanhumility On Monday, May 10, 2004, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    an articulate and deep piece, well written and fowardly strong.....urban

  • flying_fox On Thursday, May 6, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    There is an unbelievable clarity in your words... your message is conveyed loud and clear in an original and exquisite way. You are an amazing talent.

  • Seraphic On Thursday, April 29, 2004, Seraphic (209)By person wrote:

    "embrace what you fear in me" ~~ "Everything you want from me is everything I could never be" Quoting a song...it reminded me of that. This was an amazing poem *applause* loved it *~seraph~*

  • CharlottesWeb On Thursday, April 29, 2004, CharlottesWeb (511)By person wrote:

    took me about 10 minutes to read because I sat an absorbed each sentence or pair of sentences before moving on...because it seemed that understanding each sentence was imparitive to glimpsing the outline of the next one. And wow, I wonder how many of us e

  • CharlottesWeb On Thursday, April 29, 2004, CharlottesWeb (511)By person wrote:

    ever meet some one who see's the "truest dark" sides of us...and then stick around. And yeah, I think that maybe we all feel we were better or lighter at once, then we are now...and that compared, we're "only". Ya know?

  • CharlottesWeb On Thursday, April 29, 2004, CharlottesWeb (511)By person wrote:

    This has given me alot to think on. And I do mean alot. Your talent for transforming these sincere inner storms into something so amazingly beautiful, and gifted in emotion...awes me. ~JMDW~

  • aXe FactoR On Thursday, April 29, 2004, aXe FactoR (335)By person wrote:

    i dun need to reason why your works just amaze me so... u are just simply one of the best poets alive... another gripping write!

  • A former member wrote: Royality comes with a big name and you feel it all to well with your poetry, nicely done

  • worm On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, worm (1194)By person wrote:

    egads! I'm with Six on this one! (bowing deeply!) cre, you have managed to prove once again why you are on my "fav" list... well done!

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    This made my mouth go dry and my jaw drop...I'm still trying to catch up with your talent, but instead I need to bow, because I'm not worthy. *bows*

  • manywalks On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    This weaves cold tendrils through the soul, caressing its way ever deeper. Beautiful doesn't even begin to describe this. ~ wen

  • knightmirror On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    damn another amazing work from you.such passion.*speechless*-knight btw ****


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