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kaleidoscopic
By KittyStryker
i turn
and turn
let emotions present themselves
to my line of fire
i try each color, each mood
spinning in the mirror
of your eyes
to see how it fits
where it clings
what flaws it advertises
what perfections
i am dizzy
and still unsure
how i'm supposed to feel
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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Sunday, April 11, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "kaleidoscopic"
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A former member wrote:
the last stanza describes this poem as well, i don't know if it was just me. But I just got confused by it.
Everything just confused me more and more.
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On Sunday, May 30, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384)
wrote:
this is gorgeous. . .very random~ss
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
the emotion is nicley laid out and easy to see.Great Write.~~~Grave
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, AshtrayDirt
(31) wrote:
i like the visuals
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
this is simply beautiful .. i do not know what other words to dump on the ground. the hands of paper grab to your pencil. emotional intell . excellent write. [D&A]
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